| "I Need You" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: paniwi (to lazy to log in) On: January 19, 2005 12:10 CST
Comment/Review:
Very good for a first lemon, like to see more of you
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Reviewed By: darkmageliz [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O tanned Yami in a towel...hell yeah! yummy good yaoi sexiness...xDD you are ((i've said to other fine yxy authors)) frkn bloody brilliant
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Title: All hail the y?yness
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good, yes-yes. Y/Y fluffyness is always good.
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Reviewed By: Silentia On: July 08, 2004 15:35 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, first of all sorry i gave no complete rating but since i´m german i can´t really grade your grammer or style for i´m just not firm enough myself. Then... you asked in the summary how it is taht there are so many reader and so few reviews... well... i don´t usually review one shots, too... but only 7 reviews is too bad for such a nice story! I liked the lemon part very much but i think the part with Yami coming home and 'taking care of himself' was a little poor... Anyways you should write more Fics and lemons. Bye bye Silentia
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Reviewed By: Magician Valkyrie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 11:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
It was pretty good..i enjoyed it! and i think you are right....people should review your stories even if they don't like them!! Anywho, good story!
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Reviewed By: YxY4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL I like it!
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Reviewed By: Amiira Avi On: April 24, 2004 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O ... *blinks* That was your first lemon fic? *snorts* I don't believe you. :P That was really well written, I must say! I had myself smiling lightly to myself throughout the fic, and you weren't too heavy handed on the hentai, so it didn't make me feel squemish at all. Wai, very nicely done. For now.. Ja!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 18:02 CDT
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*wipes away drool* Very good lemon, considering I haven't read one in a week. Anyway, if that was ur first lemon, then I can't wait til u write another one. Ja ne!
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Title: WoW
Reviewed By: DragonRider00 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2004 20:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was...was hot! And that was your first?! That was awsome, I loved it so much!!!^^
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Reviewed By: Amora Laflour [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 12:54 CST
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That was your first? I would have never been able to tell.
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Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 11:49 CST
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*purrs happily* Wow, that was your first lemon? It was great! =)
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