Reviewed By: mistwalker [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 00:05 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Firstly, I wish to thank you for writing such a wonderful fanfic, and for taking the time to translate it into English. It was wonderful to read, and - in my mind - truly captured the essence of Duo. You continually apologized for grammatical errors, but I only found a handfull. In fact, I would say that your vocabulary more than made up for what few grammatical errors there were. Your rich use of the language truly made the scene jump off the screen, and the imagery you used made it so real that I could practically taste the salt spray and feel the wind in my hair. So thank you for a wonderful story and an enjoyable insight into Duo's mind. Mistwalker
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