| "Distant Thoughts" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: V-townlover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 23:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you really sould update soon i like this story.
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Reviewed By: teh-noise [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gotta say, I think you need to read up on honorifics instead of learning them from anime- "-kun" isn't a term of endearment, not from my understanding. Used to identify lower-classmen. And when you lack an honorific, it's a major term of endearment. Far as I know. And your English is... Odd, to say the least. It doesn't matter if you're writing really late at night, that's no excuse for uploading jumbled sentences. Wait 'til you can see the screen and edit. o_O;;
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Reviewed By: cory On: January 28, 2005 23:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why did you stop?!?!?! keep writing! i know it's been a year since you posted but please??
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Reviewed By: Shadowfoxdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 21:23 CST
Comment/Review:
yeah why haven't you updated it was really good and i want to know whats going to happen so as soon as you can update. Ja Ne Airy
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Reviewed By: Phsycobratt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 17:33 CDT
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First off, that so called 'phsycobratt666' stole my username. DAMN YOU! Second, WHY HAVEN'T YOU UPDATED YET?! HUH? HURRY UP! I really like your fic dude. So, I hate to addmit this... but... I agree with 'phsycobrat666,' I think Neji and Sakura would make a great couple. I don't know why, but I don't like SasuSaku fics so much. I prefer anything with Neji in it though. Well, I've got things to do, people to kill *coughs* not saying any names though. *Points at 'phsycobratt666'*
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Reviewed By: phsycobratt666 On: May 24, 2004 20:42 CDT
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I think you should pare up Sakura and Neji. Neji is sooooo cute. He's awesome! Uhh, anyway, hurry up and update already, you can't tell me that its over already, cause it just can't. Now, if you're having trouble coming up with some ideas get someone to help you!!
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Reviewed By: girly-chan On: May 19, 2004 21:10 CDT
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OOOOOHHHH! Goodie, I like this, so much fun. YAAYY! I hope you update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: girly-chan On: May 19, 2004 21:09 CDT
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OOOOOHHHH! Goodie, I like this, so much fun. YAAYY! I hope you update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: It's MEEEEE On: May 19, 2004 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa, you've gotta continue this!! Please, please, please, you just gotta. Oh and, make sure Sakura-chan and Neji-kun end up together, Sasuke had his chance. Nothing against him though, it's just that I hardly ever get to read any good Neji fics. Key word here being 'GOOD'. Ao, uh, yeah, buh-bye!!!!
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Title: read this...=P
Reviewed By: SakurA chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 20:10 CST
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Hi! i like your story. but, are you going to continue the story? because i liked it when sasuke shows his feelings but still trying to hide it...=P i just wnted to find out who will be the couple by the end of your story... =)
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