| "Strange Happenings" Reviews/Comments [ 84 ] |
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Title: Oh dear
Reviewed By: InuYashasLover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2016 19:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well while I do think having Houjou as the villas was fairly
interesting the rest of it was definitely lacking. It's like the
show once upon a time the story is interesting but the acting is so
bad it's hard to watch. Your story line was likewise moderately
interesting but it was extremely clunky and the characters were
exceedingly shallow. Anyone who believes for a second Inuyasha
would be quietly led to a table and sit at it is seriously
underestimating our favorite hanyou.
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2008 20:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, even though your style of writing is pretty good, the story wasn't very original, other than using Hojou's name for the bad guy. Let's face it, he might as well have been an OC. In the manga and in the anime, he's completely harmless. I thought the ending was a little forced. Not to mention that, although I wouldn't put it passed Kikyou to stood to those levels if she felt the urgent need to drag InuYasha to hell before she defeated Naraku, it is incredibly far fetched that InuYasha would admit his undying love for Kagome in that situation. More like he'd be feeling betrayed by Kikyou yet again. So all in all, work on your plot development, your writing style is great, and you should practice dialouge a little more.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 20:11 PDT
Comment/Review:
amazing story... i really liked it... great work... good job...
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Reviewed By: tohruxkyoxyukilover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 16:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great romance novel! You are tottally added to my favorite list i loved the whole thing there was never one chapter that i got bored of thank you soo much please keep up the good work and tell me if you are working on any new stories!
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Reviewed By: bookworm810 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 04:12 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey there. I just finished reading this story, and I got to say I rather liked it. The only complaint I would make is that it seems to end rather quickly, but as that's a problem that most writers have at soem point, including my self, I'm not going to say to much about that. Overall, one of the better fanfics I've read, i love the new take you've given on Hojo and I like that you've brought youkai to the future as well. Well, i've said everything I wanted to say, and I'm off to read the sequel now.
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Title: KONNICHIWA!
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 05:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH GREAT ENDING WOOT! I'M GOING TO START ON THE SEQUL RIGHT NOW YEAH MANTEN!
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 05:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH KUSO NOT THAT BITCH! I HATE KIKYO!
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 05:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o what's HOBO...I mean Hojo got planed for them now?
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Title: konnicgiwa
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 05:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH ANOTHER GOOD CHAPTER WOOT, GO SHIPPOU GO!
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Title: konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 04:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo, poor Kagome Inuyasha and shippou waaa!
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 04:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH WOOT CHREAT CHAPTER, *Does a giddy dance*
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Title: konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 04:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH I love it when Inuyasha gets all dommonint lol
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 04:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Sigh* Miroku never changes does he lol
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 04:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH LEMON FINALY AWSOME CHAPTER!
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 04:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Konnichiwa docharihe, kono loved it!
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 04:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH! I just love it when Inuyasha gets all protective
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Title: Konnichiwa!
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 04:05 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH STUPID CLIFFY! BUT GREAT CHAPTER THOUGH!
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Title: konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 03:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL I LOVED THE WHOLE HOSED DOWN THING! LOL GREAT CHAPTER!
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Title: konnichiwa!
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 03:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh nice ending to this chapter lol LOVED IT!
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Title: Konniochiwa!
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 14:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL great chapter I likie it, I love Kagomes mother ^_^
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Title: Konnichiwa!
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 13:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH GREAT CHAPTER LOVED IT WOOT WOOT! ^_^ Lady Kagome
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Title: Konnichiwa!
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 09:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT CHAPTER POOR RIN!
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Title: Konnichiwa!
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 09:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...ooooooooo HOJO GOINED HER CLASS RUN KAGOME! -
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Title: Konnichiwa!
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 09:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER! Ooo Sesshomarou is comming into the pitch interesting ^_^
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Title: Konnichiwa!
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 09:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER ^_^ I love it when Miroku...well acts like himself ^_^
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Title: Konnichiwa!
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 09:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo, poor Kagome, INUYASHA WON'T LET THAT WEEK HUMAN NEAR HER THOUGH! Lady Kagome
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Title: Konnichiwa!
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 09:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH GREAT CHAPTER WOOT! I hope Inuyasha get's to kill Hojo asap! Mary Sama
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Title: Konnichiwa!
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 08:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah that was a good chapter...oh to be in that mens clothing story when Inuyasha walked out with out a shirt. ^_^
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Title: Konnichiwa!
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 08:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah that was a good chapter, it was verry cute ^_^
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Title: Konnnichiwa!
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 06:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah great chapter I just love it when Inuyashas cute little more dog like trates come out ^_^
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