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Reviewed By: Naomi_Ikahen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 23:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've got a good plot, though common, I like fics like these. I suggest being more descriptive and write longer sentences, not just short fragments. And try not being so OOC with a few if you may o.O And make the chapters longer, yeah, that's it. -_- Update soon kay? =D
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Reviewed By: Hino Mitsukiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2004 22:57 CST
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I agree with Laura-chan, you need to edit more. And you could get s/o 2 read over your stuff B4 u post it, so you'll know if it's good or bad. The best type of person would b s/o who has never heard of Inuyasha, so when they read it, you'll know that you did a good job b/c they'll have understood the characters' personalities and flaws/quirks. It's a process that's proven to work great.
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: Chanel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2004 15:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's good! plz continue! i'm interested
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan (too lazy to login) On: January 05, 2004 07:48 CST
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It seems really interesting, but try to articulate more the sentences.... Good Work! ^^
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