| "Chaos High" Reviews/Comments [ 139 ] |
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Reviewed By: V the anime fan On: March 17, 2004 15:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HIYAS!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! I always wait patiently for you to update! This is so awsome, I love that you put all the Inu Yasha-gumi into High School it's SUPER!!!!! Keep up the good work and update soon!!! P.S. THIS FAN FIC IS SUPER DUPER COOL!!!!!!!!
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Title: lemon_lover
Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 06:43 CST
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write more please please update
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Reviewed By: anubis_himura nli On: March 16, 2004 19:04 CST
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oo0o there is some tension. . . great chapter ^-^
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 22:30 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter, but I have a request for you or your beta reader: to use commas. There have been a few times where I have to read the sentence or phrase again and 'imagine' a comma in a spot. I noticed, you had something like "Kagome are you ok?" It's suppose to be "Kagome, are.." Sorry for the grammar lesson but you'll thank me. Err.. probably not. Nevermind :P
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Reviewed By: Daman 388 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 19:07 CST
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You are welcome my lovely Tina, this slave is always at your beck and call when I am needed
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 19:05 CST
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omg, no way did Kouga really flip out like that....how could he hurt Kag like that? Thats just terrible...And the way Naraku is in "running From the Past" I'm seriously scared to know what happens next
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 20:07 CST
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w00t w00t a super chapter and a lemon, youre the author that keeps on giving arencha? This is to cool, I cant wait to check out the rest of your stuff
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Reviewed By: Anubis_Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 15:25 CST
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o0o yay, this made me happy I love this story, I am sure I've said that before but I do I really do! ^_^ great update okay ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo I love the lemon
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 11:11 CST
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I just read your fic and I think it's wonderful! :) Keep it up and I can't wait for an update.
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 15:39 CST
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Everybody likes lemons. I'm so happy that Inu and Kagome have mated (that sounded really bad) I bet it'll be really funny when Kouga finds out and freaks out. I'm sure all your readers would be up for another lemon, but if it doesn't feel right to you, don't do it.
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 01:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no its not too soon please put up more lemons
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Reviewed By: WinterWolf On: March 03, 2004 23:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you should do another lemon or some oral sex or something. It would be kind of funny if Kagome started to tern into a nympho
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Reviewed By: FrbddnAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 20:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good!!! ya did a great job on it
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 18:46 CST
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aww thats so sweet in a porno perverted kinda way, but they, thats why it has a hentai labble! lol I had the day from hell and i have a long list of updated to read but i have to do three projects and its already 8 pm! *cries* I cant wait to read the rest of what you've written!!
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