| "Chaos High" Reviews/Comments [ 139 ] |
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 16:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww how cute
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 04:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that was heart warming :) I'm eager to know what Naraku will do..
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 01:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter, but right now I have to go review your other updated fanfiction. Good job so far :)
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 23:25 CST
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awww shippo is the cutest thing~!!! Inu is so good to her, I love it when hes not a jerk, lol. cant wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 18:09 CST
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Aww, the ending was soooo cute! I still cant get over the fact that Kouga hurt Kagome like that...Stupid wolf lol. I can't wait for the next chapter, I just know it will rule.
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Reviewed By: Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 19:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sounds good so far. cant wait till the next chapter
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 19:10 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter... I didn't think Kagome's mom would act that way. I would think she would act all motherly and be just a LITTLE more concerned for her daughter.
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Reviewed By: anubis_himura nli On: March 17, 2004 17:40 CST
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awww yay. . . Inu rocks!
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Reviewed By: V the anime fan On: March 17, 2004 15:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HIYAS!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! I always wait patiently for you to update! This is so awsome, I love that you put all the Inu Yasha-gumi into High School it's SUPER!!!!! Keep up the good work and update soon!!! P.S. THIS FAN FIC IS SUPER DUPER COOL!!!!!!!!
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Title: lemon_lover
Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 06:43 CST
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write more please please update
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Reviewed By: anubis_himura nli On: March 16, 2004 19:04 CST
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oo0o there is some tension. . . great chapter ^-^
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 22:30 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter, but I have a request for you or your beta reader: to use commas. There have been a few times where I have to read the sentence or phrase again and 'imagine' a comma in a spot. I noticed, you had something like "Kagome are you ok?" It's suppose to be "Kagome, are.." Sorry for the grammar lesson but you'll thank me. Err.. probably not. Nevermind :P
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Reviewed By: Daman 388 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 19:07 CST
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You are welcome my lovely Tina, this slave is always at your beck and call when I am needed
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 19:05 CST
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omg, no way did Kouga really flip out like that....how could he hurt Kag like that? Thats just terrible...And the way Naraku is in "running From the Past" I'm seriously scared to know what happens next
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 20:07 CST
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w00t w00t a super chapter and a lemon, youre the author that keeps on giving arencha? This is to cool, I cant wait to check out the rest of your stuff
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