| "Bartenders and Brunettes" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: lil_d_8 On: January 29, 2004 18:16 CST
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i like what u have so far keep up the good work...by the way do u like tekken u could really do some justice 2 some of those fics if u do thenm think bout it.
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Reviewed By: case On: January 26, 2004 16:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to make it more clear who is speaking- the dialogue runs together and seems forced-otherwise, this is not too bad
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: January 26, 2004 14:32 CST
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LOVE this! Keep witing the good stuff! Adios!
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Reviewed By: Frosts_Baby_Vampire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 09:27 CST
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it's me... yeah the author... thanks for the reviews, i will try to post everytime i get a chance... i had some trouble finding an editor, but one of my freinds volunteered... anyway just wanted to say thanks...
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Reviewed By: Shawna On: January 19, 2004 02:24 CST
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WWWWWWWRRRRRRRRIIIIITTTTTTTTTTEEEEEE MMMMMOOOOOORRRRRRREEEEEEEEE PLEASE!!!!!!!!! IT WAS GETTING TO THE BEST PART!!!!!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Chinina-Chan
Reviewed By: Chinina-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ummmm... i got a ? iz Sango gay? Well otha than that it very good.
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Reviewed By: Spectre97 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 15:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like the story so far. Keep up the good work and plz update soon.
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Title: rin-no-nii-chan
Reviewed By: rin-no-nii-chan On: January 09, 2004 09:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well that explains about her brother, but why did she give that thing to Inu? ~~Tbpeppy~~
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Title: rin-no-nii-chan
Reviewed By: tbpeppy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2004 07:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Who wants KAgome more Sesshoumaru or Inuyahsa? Like always excellent chappie. ~~Tbpeppy~~ P.S. I know you told me not to review but hey i got PLENTY of spare time *evil grins*
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Title: rin-no-nii-chan
Reviewed By: tbpeppy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2004 07:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awe poor Kagome and Souta.....Oh well it makes for a good plot. I feel sorry for her grandpa though. ~~Tbpeppy~~
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Title: rin-no-nii-chan
Reviewed By: tbpeppy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2004 07:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You did much better this chapter on who was saying what and it did make it much easier to read. Very interesting. You know our days are always much happier after Kikyo gets dissed. ^_^ ~~Tbpeppy~~
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Title: rin-no-nii-chan
Reviewed By: tbpeppy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2004 07:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's an interesting story plot so far, but when you have dialouge please tell who is saying what because that gt's confusing. I like it though. ~~Tbpepppy~~
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Reviewed By: Anubis_Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good, I hope you update soon, I am an impacient little sucker! ^_^ I like the way its coming along; keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Descendant [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2004 20:39 CST
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I thought this was very interesting! It's good, I want more. -Des
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Reviewed By: katz21 On: January 05, 2004 16:54 CST
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hey there, its an ok fic.......has someone been watching too much "coyote ugly" (it's a movie, not an actual ugly coyote)? anywayz, yeah......got a few tips (constructive critism, don't flame me!) you should try using separators (is that how you spell it?) i got kinda confused on who was talking, and oh, you should also try to have the conversations separated from thae paragraphs......i think that's all i have to say. oh wait! um.....in your fic, wut colour r Inu's eyes (it mentions da colour violet n i know for sure that his eyes are amber, being a hanyou) and wut kind of accent does he have? he says the word love a lot....anywayz....update n i'll review later..byez
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