| "Bartenders and Brunettes" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: anubis_himura nli On: February 19, 2004 16:35 CST
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o0o0o... this is getting even better ^-^ I can't wait to read more.. It's so fun! Great job
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Title: hi everybody
Reviewed By: Frosts_Baby_Vampire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 11:18 CST
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hola persons, this is FBV talking... thanks for the reviews and Shae-Yasha i will try to update as soon as i can... i have been working on the story so don't worry.... the blocker won't let me update so i'll have to wait until. it's down... sry fo rthe inconvenience everybody!!
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Reviewed By: midnight43 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 16:11 CST
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NOOOOOOOOOOO,...MUST READ MORE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: SHAE-YASHA On: February 15, 2004 12:41 CST
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WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UP DATE BECAUSE IF IT'S NOT SOON, I AM GOING TO DIE WAITING!!!! IT'S A GREAT STORY AND I CAN'T WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXTS, SO GET THE NEW CHAPTERS SOON...PLEASE?!?!?! LOOK I EVEN ASKED POLITLY, DOESN'T THAT COUNT AS ANYTHING?!?!?!
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Reviewed By: person unknown On: February 14, 2004 18:18 CST
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hey u gonna update or what?
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Reviewed By: frqnt rdr On: February 07, 2004 12:50 CST
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nice story but im very impatient...so update! plz! lol have a nice day....hint hint full of writin!
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Reviewed By: FrbddnAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this alot. its sad because of Souta and her parents. otherwise its good. cant wait till you update
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Reviewed By: SHAE-YASHA On: February 03, 2004 20:14 CST
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YOU JUST HAVE TO WRITE MORE SOON AND VERY SOON.....PLEASE?!?!?!? YOU'RE FANTASTIC, ABSOLUTLY FANTASTIC!!!!! IT'S SO CUTE SO FARE AND I CAN'T WAIT TO READ YOUR NEXT CHAPTERS!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: lil_d_8 On: January 29, 2004 18:16 CST
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i like what u have so far keep up the good work...by the way do u like tekken u could really do some justice 2 some of those fics if u do thenm think bout it.
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Reviewed By: case On: January 26, 2004 16:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to make it more clear who is speaking- the dialogue runs together and seems forced-otherwise, this is not too bad
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: January 26, 2004 14:32 CST
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LOVE this! Keep witing the good stuff! Adios!
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Reviewed By: Frosts_Baby_Vampire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 09:27 CST
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it's me... yeah the author... thanks for the reviews, i will try to post everytime i get a chance... i had some trouble finding an editor, but one of my freinds volunteered... anyway just wanted to say thanks...
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Reviewed By: Shawna On: January 19, 2004 02:24 CST
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WWWWWWWRRRRRRRRIIIIITTTTTTTTTTEEEEEE MMMMMOOOOOORRRRRRREEEEEEEEE PLEASE!!!!!!!!! IT WAS GETTING TO THE BEST PART!!!!!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Chinina-Chan
Reviewed By: Chinina-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ummmm... i got a ? iz Sango gay? Well otha than that it very good.
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Reviewed By: Spectre97 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 15:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like the story so far. Keep up the good work and plz update soon.
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