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Title: rin-no-nii-chan
Reviewed By: rin-no-nii-chan On: January 09, 2004 09:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well that explains about her brother, but why did she give that thing to Inu? ~~Tbpeppy~~
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Title: rin-no-nii-chan
Reviewed By: tbpeppy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2004 07:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Who wants KAgome more Sesshoumaru or Inuyahsa? Like always excellent chappie. ~~Tbpeppy~~ P.S. I know you told me not to review but hey i got PLENTY of spare time *evil grins*
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Title: rin-no-nii-chan
Reviewed By: tbpeppy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2004 07:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awe poor Kagome and Souta.....Oh well it makes for a good plot. I feel sorry for her grandpa though. ~~Tbpeppy~~
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Title: rin-no-nii-chan
Reviewed By: tbpeppy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2004 07:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You did much better this chapter on who was saying what and it did make it much easier to read. Very interesting. You know our days are always much happier after Kikyo gets dissed. ^_^ ~~Tbpeppy~~
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Title: rin-no-nii-chan
Reviewed By: tbpeppy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2004 07:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's an interesting story plot so far, but when you have dialouge please tell who is saying what because that gt's confusing. I like it though. ~~Tbpepppy~~
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Reviewed By: Anubis_Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good, I hope you update soon, I am an impacient little sucker! ^_^ I like the way its coming along; keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Descendant [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2004 20:39 CST
Comment/Review:
I thought this was very interesting! It's good, I want more. -Des
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Reviewed By: katz21 On: January 05, 2004 16:54 CST
Comment/Review:
hey there, its an ok fic.......has someone been watching too much "coyote ugly" (it's a movie, not an actual ugly coyote)? anywayz, yeah......got a few tips (constructive critism, don't flame me!) you should try using separators (is that how you spell it?) i got kinda confused on who was talking, and oh, you should also try to have the conversations separated from thae paragraphs......i think that's all i have to say. oh wait! um.....in your fic, wut colour r Inu's eyes (it mentions da colour violet n i know for sure that his eyes are amber, being a hanyou) and wut kind of accent does he have? he says the word love a lot....anywayz....update n i'll review later..byez
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