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| "Bitter Memories" Reviews/Comments [ 256 ] | | Pages (18): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 › » ] | Reviewed By: Mandie On: October 25, 2004 23:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Greay fic! Update soon!!!
| Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 15:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
=O!!! You can't end it now! I just spent all morning reading this and it is fantabulous!!!It was on Somnambulicious's recomendation list so I thought that I should check it out. Now I just wish that there would be more! Awesome job with everything so far--- keep up the amazing work!!! ---Aitu
| Reviewed By: Summerdancer On: August 24, 2004 11:25 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Loved it! I can't wait for more.
| Title: Chapter 23
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 13:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapters. Update again soon. Can't wait to see if the good guys conquer the evil, if Kagome still lives and Inuyasha and Yukina get together.
| Title: Pleases
Reviewed By: Jelly belly On: July 06, 2004 18:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAASSSSSSEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSS SSSSS up date soon I really really like it!
| Title: new chapter!
Reviewed By: lover girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 14:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
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hey! when are u gona up date? the suppences is killing me.
| Reviewed By: yashamoru ( to lazy to lgin) On: June 24, 2004 00:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story I think Yusuke/Jakotsu, Kuwabara/Yura, Botan/Kagura would be the best
| Reviewed By: Foxylilraven On: June 22, 2004 17:48 EDT
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UPDATE DAMNIT
| Reviewed By: sm On: June 12, 2004 05:01 EDT
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Excellent story. Looking forward to next chapter.
| Reviewed By: Lunabelle On: June 09, 2004 23:13 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, first off I must say that I love your story. I only found it a few days ago and have not been able to stop reading it. Second of all, I don't know the characters of either anime well enough to judge who would be the best paired up in a fight. In fact, I know very little of Yu Yu Hakusho. I have only recently found that I like the show, (especially Hiei) and know zip about it. Third, if you kill any good guy, I will be extremely upset! (That is putting it nicely) It is just down right mean to rip Kagome away from Hiei or Inuyasha away from Yukina, or even still Kurama away from Botan. (I love them as a couple) Fourth, when in all that is HOLY are you going to update! I know some authors are slow (I'm one of them), but people are actually dying from suspence here. I think I heard someone keel over while reading the last chapter. OH, by the way, I'm not so sure Kanna was so smart in stealing Kurama's soul and facing Youko. That demon, no matter how sexy he looks, looks as if the devil would be afraid of him. (I love the ears) OK, I have said my peace and reviewed, now you UPDATE!
| Title: YOUR A MENACE!!!!
Reviewed By: brey_autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 15:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! You are such a menace! We have all been waiting to see what happens and you sit on your butt and review my stories, but don't update yours?!?!?! (Not that I'm complaining about you reading mine...) WHAT IN THE GODS NAME IS WRONG WITH YOU!!!!!! I know for a fact that your just being lazily! You told me you pretty much have it all written up , but you just haven't felt like finishing it! EVERYONE THAT READS THIS: BItch at her! She needs to get off her ass and write some more, don't you all agree? Black heart, I swear if you don't finish this I will overload your email box with viruses! Got it? As your best friend, I insist that you get your lazy ass in gear! BREY
| Reviewed By: Sanura [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 19:27 EDT
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wow, just started reading your fic, and I have to say, "wow" you have some real talent, throughout the story I laughed, nearly falling out of my seat at times, and cried, especially at the beginning, your description of the deaths of the Inu gang as well as the scene in which Kagome finds her family slaughtered was amazing. But as for your question at the end of ch. 24 as to who we think should be paired up with who, here's my opinion: Yura vs. Botan. Reason: Yusuke and Kuwabara would most likely be easily distracted by Yura's lack of clothing. Kuwabara vs. Kagura. Reason: Kagura, being a wind sorceress, would easily be able to deflect Yusuke's spirit gun. Yusuke vs. Jakotsu. Reason: no real reason, those two were the last two left, I really haven't seen far enough into the Inu series to really see much of Jakotsu, the most I know about him, is that he's gay. Ooh, there's a good reason, Jakotsu would be too distracted by Yusuke's good looks to really fight. lol, well there's my opinion on who should fight who, now, please update soon.
| Reviewed By: Shirensede Anjiru On: May 13, 2004 21:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay Yura/Botan Kagura/Yusuke and that other guy with kuwabara
| Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: May 12, 2004 16:43 EDT
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poor Kurama! And wouldn't that be a shock for Kanna? or did she already know?
| Title: Hi again
Reviewed By: Bitch of the Highway Thieves [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 12:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I half suspect that you're going to pair Yusuke and Jakotsu together in battle... That one would be obvious cuz Jakotsu is gay and thinks Miroku is 'sexy', so he'd find Yusuke sexy as well. Botan will probably be stuck with Yura, because she's got pretty hair, and Yura of the Hair, obviously, has a hair fetish. Wich leaves Kuwabara with Kagura. I feel terribly sorry for her, cuz Kuwabara is an idiot. But this is just my opinion, but you probably won't play it out this way, because of my guess. Wheather you meant them to be this way or not is beside the point, you will still probably change the groupings to make me look bad ^_^! I'm not offended, just do what you do best and keep writting, even if it does make guessers like me look dumb. That's what we get for guessing, ne? WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!! Till next time, Ja!
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