| "Bitter Memories" Reviews/Comments [ 256 ] |
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 14:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I just read all the posted chapters this morning. The opening chapters where Kagome's friends are killed and she cremates them literally made tears come to my eyes. You described the new high school so evocatively that it seems a shame more scenes didn't occur there. I especially wanted to know about the cute/homely girl dress code. I downgraded for spelling because there were some places where it seemed like you had let the spell checker choose a word for you (sadly, I can't find an example at this point) or used a wrong tense or omitted a comma. Fairly trivial stuff. Now, I want to read a happy ending!!!
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 19:29 EST
Comment/Review:
*sniff sniff* that's so sad! i want to cry!!! please let then get together soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Valkyrie Nienna Helyanwe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 19:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you need to update now. please i only check my mail looking for this story anymore. put me out of my misery
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Reviewed By: emerald dragon hanyou On: March 11, 2004 22:50 EST
Comment/Review:
ah **** it!!!!! i just read the reviews and she did tell u!!!!!!!!!!! im so.... ahh i cant think of any words 2 describe it!!! well, i'll b back anyway, so plz review soon!!!!!!!!! gods im so embarressed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~~*~~*EMERALD-
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Reviewed By: emerald dragon hanyou On: March 11, 2004 22:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
noooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! how could u leave it RIGHT there?!?!!?!?!??!?!?!?! u big meanie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *crying**mood change* well, guess i'll answer your question in chapter 13. the truth is i first read (your)lime on fluffyfan's fic. but she changed the dream filled lime 2 a lemon. but she apologized for it afterwards. this is actually what she said, quote, "confession time.that leomn wasn't entirely mine. i got most of my ideas from a fic called 'bitter memories' by BlackHeartCrimsonTears.i'm sorry i took it, really i am.so ya that lemon was 99.9% hers and its a really awesome ficso you should read it and review!" if she already told u this then im really embarressed. hope u update soon! i cant stand hiei's and kagome's heartbreak 4 very long! plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!! i'll b back! ja ~~*~~*EMERALD-
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Reviewed By: lady3 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 18:20 EST
Comment/Review:
pleaase please please update soon!!! there isn't that many hiei/Kagome fics and you is really good so please update soon!!! thanks
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Reviewed By: Kira and inu On: March 09, 2004 19:20 EST
Comment/Review:
WHY DID YOU MAKE IT SOOOO SAD!?!?!? i was looking for a drama pice but i didnt expect this... i feel like Hiei... i NEVER cry but i did when reading about inuyasha and kagomes family and inuyasha comeing back...IT WAS ALL JUST SOO SAD!!! PLEASE UPDATE! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!! o and you can AIM me at kira the neko
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Reviewed By: inu fan On: March 09, 2004 17:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more its really really good and i must find out the rest. p.s. if you dont write more i'll chain you down, break every bone in your body, remove your skin and make a pair of pants with it. :)
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Reviewed By: samantha On: March 08, 2004 09:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, its like so different than others ive read.
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Reviewed By: Kagome360 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 22:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I am loveing the story!!!!!!!!!!! U HAVE TO GET THEM TOGETHER SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Icy_Mirror [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 22:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Welcome back! Loved the new chappie! Sooo sad..Poor Hiei..If only he knew. Can't wait to see what's gonna happen next! Well, UPDATE SOON!!!
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Title: GREAT!
Reviewed By: Dark_Shadow_Hiei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 21:56 EST
Comment/Review:
Awww,Hiei was crying?That is sad.I hope you update really soon and I have a great idea for the fic.I heard that Hiei cries black tear gems and maybe when Hiei and Kagome see each other again,he can give her a necklace made from his teargems!BYE!UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: cristina On: March 02, 2004 21:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHERE THE HELL IS HIEI, HE MUST! GO BACK TO KAG OR ELSE, SORRYTHAT WAS MY EVIL PART. I HOPE THAT YOU UP SATE SOON PLEASE. OHHHHHHHH........ HIEI RULSS, WELL JA NE!
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Title: You almost made me cry!
Reviewed By: Rootbeer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 21:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!!!! MY POOR BABY!!!! I WAS ALMOST IN TEARS!!!! o_0...he was. Aaaww... Poor Hiei! It's so sad! But so good! Damn! You have me hooked and it's going to make me cry, damn you...but I really love your pairings, and you're an EXCELLENT writer. It's just so sad!
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Title: Gomen
Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 21:17 EST
Comment/Review:
im sorry i stole yer lemon...please forvive me...(shya right)anyways if its any conslation; at least you know that yer fic is so good that people love it and even go so far as to steal it...again im really sorry, i should have asked. ^_^ please keep writing, i promise i wont take anything without permission ever again. ja ne
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