Reviewed By: Sai_Saishi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 17:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice job, very cute fic ^-^ I enjoyed reading this story, though I admit that I got lost a little here or there... (mostly being my own fault, keeping that it mind...) I liked the way that it was written, pretty smooth with one or two errors here or there (with most writing this does occur, even in published ones!). This could have used a few more descriptive words here or there, but maybe I'm just really picky about that (because I tell mostly everyone that!). Over all rating is a 9, mostly because I don't like to give out perfect 10's for over all's, but also partly for the afformentioned possable gain of describing words. I over all liked it, short and cute ^-^ keep up the good work *-^
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