| "Shinigami's Lover 4" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: Airen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2004 15:54 CST
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Wow. Life is never dull for Heero and Duo, is it? It's also amusing to know that even though Grange is becoming friendlier, he's still a trouble-making hardass. I'm glad Wufei's around - I find him extremely entertaining for some bizarre reason. Three silly Gundam pilots...makes me wonder what Trowa and Quatre are up to. Enjoying this story muchly. What life-threatening misfortune will Duo and Heero endure next?
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: March 30, 2004 14:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
2 Chapters posted a one time verry cool.. I really love this story..I can't beleave it only has 13 reviews. It should have 100's!!! Well you keep up the great writing and I'll keep reading... Untill next time ..TTFNPlease update again soon...^_~
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2004 13:00 CST
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Doh, stupid mm.org. Okay this is the real review, not the empty one. WOw you certainly threw everything and the kitchen sink at those poor boys! Heero and Duo will get post-traumatic stress disorder at the sight of a tree now, and will probably go beserk if meeting a squirrel. Great suspense and tension, it just swept me along these two chapters effortlessly. So, now that the camping trip from hell is over - and Duo gets a little TLC - what's up for the next chapter? Hope to find out soon!
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2004 12:57 CST
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 15:45 CST
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That was very well done, and a nice illustration of how to do 'anguished' without doing 'angsty'. The different psychological reactions of Heero and Duo are well done too. And the ending...it was both touching and hopeful, in a way, Heero probably needed it. Anyway...very well done, and I'll be waiting anxiously for the next chapter to see what else is going to happen in this fun camping trip. (My fav line is probably Wufei trying to meditate and his dog trying to stop him. whew, a nicely needed light smile in this chapter)
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: March 08, 2004 14:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ilove this chapter it made me cry... god you are a great writer... update again soon...
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: February 21, 2004 18:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this story... I't gets better and better with each and every chapter keep up the good work...
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2004 08:13 CST
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So let me see if I got it right...One jealous boyfriend, three Gundam Pilots, two of which are live wires and the third extremly grumpy about being there...fun anyone? Kit's knocked her head a bit harder than she thinks...Great story, I love the humour and the character interaction, particularly Wufei's one-liners. I actually liked what we saw of his character in the previous arc too - grouchy, stubborn, solitary by choice, but always reliable when the chips were down. I'm glad he joined the trip!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: February 01, 2004 19:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A smart person would have asked for help ... I love this story .Please update soon...
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 09:19 CST
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okay, now you're just spoiling us. Don't stop it, I like it! Maybe a chapter of Prince and SOldiers tomorrow? Hmm? Is this going to be a fic of a few chapters, a sort of vignette showing details of the 1x2 and their interaction wtih a normal person (and squirrels)? Or is this the start of something longer? I'll have to wait and see, I suppose. Either way looking forward to it, and loving the touches of humor, as well as the little reminders of the past arcs which enrichen the fic.
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces17 On: January 29, 2004 09:48 CST
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Awesome!!! i love this series ^^....This will be amusing, i can't wait to see what kind of troubles Duo and Heero get in out here and there will be troubles...lol...^^ Good luck and I can't wait to read the next chapter ^^ ~KIM~
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Reviewed By: Fuu_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2004 21:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! Where's the rest?? WHERE IS THE REST???? Oh please, please write some more!! Actually I just read all of the rest of this arc in one go.... DAMN woman! I wish I could write like you!!!
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Reviewed By: fanny On: January 09, 2004 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man! There's another Shinigami's Lover. This is already good. I can't wait till the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: January 06, 2004 21:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Review how can I not review ..This story is so great I wish it wouldent end ..So keep going and I'll keep reading and please don't end it ..The story that is ...ok so I really like this story and look forward to your next update so until then TTFN
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 10:47 CST
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Oh glorious day! We're getting a new arc in the Shinigami's Lover series! Yes!! Great start, with little touches of humour and the carefully drawn character interaction. I can't believe Kit was, er, let's call it brave enough to try to drag 01 and 02 out to commune with Mother Nature. Oh dear. I'll be waiting for the result with bated breath!
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