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Reviewed By: priscel*throws in her change with Patty 40* On: July 11, 2004 11:37 CDT
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I agree a Shini5 with a 1x2x5 relationship would be great!I agree with Duo though, the looks and expressions on Wuffers face did at first seem a bit weird and the downright happiness he exuded/beamed at his inclusion is encouraging for the extention of Duo's and Heero's relationship. i think it'll take a lot of development and MAN it will be a worthy venture
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Reviewed By: priscel**** On: July 11, 2004 11:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was pure hell they put Duo through..i hadn't realized that we were at the end of this fic. *sigh* Gee Heero was so devastated and i'm so glad that although Duo was still pissed, I wouldn't blame him, he reassured Heero that he loved him that hadn't changed, heero really needed that reassurance. i knew something was up with Wu-bear! From his actions i came to the same conclusion he wanted to belong, be included, feel apart of things. So being asked to stay really gave him that sense especially since it came from Duo. Wu-bear knew/felt like he was included from Heero but in an incomplete sense because Duo is a very important part of heero's life. I love your fics, every story is unique and has a life of its own. Even though sometimes I don't want them to end but I know they hafta. Thank you *holds up Kracken fan club flag and waves it proudly*
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: June 14, 2004 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this chapter and this story I would like to write a longer review to tell you how great this story is..But I can't because I have to go lie down with my daughter .. She is not feeling well,so I'll just say thank you for the great story and I hope you write a Shini 5 and put 1+2+5 together and let us here more about 3&4 . Oh my daughter Jillian who is 16teen said she likes your story to..or also...I red your story to her to help her feel better..Don't worry I left out the sex parts...
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson@pacbell.net On: June 13, 2004 13:46 CDT
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I don't blame Duo for being ticked off, in fact, I'm a little surprised he's willing to keep working for people who treat him like that. I'm proud of all the boys and how far they've come, and you wrote their growth so well. Glad Wufei is in it a bit more, I've felt sorry for him for quite a while. Maybe hanging out more with your friends is another step closer to "normal"?
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 13:29 CDT
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Well, Wufei and Heero are still in the doghouse, but looks like Duo did gain something from that venture. A sober, understated but warm ending. Aww :) I'm glad to see Wufei getting closer to the guys. Must be lonely with only that dumb mutt as company. So...When's Shinigami's Lover 5?
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 08:57 CDT
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The gunmen bursting in smacked of a little deus ex machina, but that scene was so good I'll forgive you. I loved the image of Duo, Heero and Wufei arguing together, completely ignoring the gunmen and deliberately provoking them. The action scene was good. The test itself was, well, pretty much what they had to do to make sure Duo still had a fairly good grip on reality...but yeah, Heero's in the doghouse (with a blanket, lol, that was funny) and I'm sure Duo will enjoy tearing into him and then making up afterwards. Next chapter please!
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 19:43 CDT
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Aww, a little TLC...Love the Harri/Duo banter (keep the receipts, *snicker*) and the 1x2 of course...you can make Heero into a poet and still fairly believable, a major accomplishment. Now is Duo going to be able to keep it together during the inquest...
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: April 23, 2004 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have written to many reviews ..I just don't know what to say any more ?.. Amm I could say ,I love this chapter,But I've said that even though I do love this chapter but that is getting old ...or I could say your a great writer.But is getting old to .Oh you are a great writer .. since I don't know what to say I'll just say update again soon but as you see I have said that one a lot...How many different ways can you tell some one you like there stories ? hmm I'll figure it out some day.. If you turned this in to a 1x2x5 I would still like it...
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 17:33 CDT
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Wow, The longest Arc I've read in some time. I wonder when Heero will tell Duo what happen to him when he was captured? I have this strong suspicion that it's a lot worse then he's letting on. It's got to be so hard for Heero, does he fear that by telling Duo he won't be strong enough to help duo ...is he in fear he'd start wollying in the pain and humiliation he suffered and not be there for Duo?? I think Duo is strong enough to handle it and help Heero but at the same time I dunno, he may just get pissed off and start hunting down all the Oz poop heads -Sigh- I've just got to the Chap "Flash" and I wanted to include my comments before I bounced off to work. Love your works Kracken, Thank you.
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Reviewed By: Airen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2004 15:54 CST
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Wow. Life is never dull for Heero and Duo, is it? It's also amusing to know that even though Grange is becoming friendlier, he's still a trouble-making hardass. I'm glad Wufei's around - I find him extremely entertaining for some bizarre reason. Three silly Gundam pilots...makes me wonder what Trowa and Quatre are up to. Enjoying this story muchly. What life-threatening misfortune will Duo and Heero endure next?
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: March 30, 2004 14:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
2 Chapters posted a one time verry cool.. I really love this story..I can't beleave it only has 13 reviews. It should have 100's!!! Well you keep up the great writing and I'll keep reading... Untill next time ..TTFNPlease update again soon...^_~
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2004 13:00 CST
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Doh, stupid mm.org. Okay this is the real review, not the empty one. WOw you certainly threw everything and the kitchen sink at those poor boys! Heero and Duo will get post-traumatic stress disorder at the sight of a tree now, and will probably go beserk if meeting a squirrel. Great suspense and tension, it just swept me along these two chapters effortlessly. So, now that the camping trip from hell is over - and Duo gets a little TLC - what's up for the next chapter? Hope to find out soon!
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2004 12:57 CST
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 15:45 CST
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That was very well done, and a nice illustration of how to do 'anguished' without doing 'angsty'. The different psychological reactions of Heero and Duo are well done too. And the ending...it was both touching and hopeful, in a way, Heero probably needed it. Anyway...very well done, and I'll be waiting anxiously for the next chapter to see what else is going to happen in this fun camping trip. (My fav line is probably Wufei trying to meditate and his dog trying to stop him. whew, a nicely needed light smile in this chapter)
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: March 08, 2004 14:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ilove this chapter it made me cry... god you are a great writer... update again soon...
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