"Torture of Temptation" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: WingFan On: January 14, 2004 10:21 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I like how the story begins. Wonder how soon heero will show his feelings. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: January 11, 2004 10:55 CST Comment/Review: The chapters are very short! The fic so far has caught my interest. Update soon and keep up the good job.
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