| "Fine, but You First!" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Gothicchic76 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 14:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
i luv ur fanfic. y haven't u upadated in a really long time?
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Reviewed By: shan shan shan On: April 11, 2004 20:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
nice very good. Just update =)
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Reviewed By: Dark Flame Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 11:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue I love this story!
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Title: good
Reviewed By: antisocial mint [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 01:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was good i like the hiei/kag brother/sis -ness it was cool! UPDATE--i know its hard but you gotta!
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Reviewed By: DarkWaterKitsune (Too lazy to log in!) On: January 10, 2004 19:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is good. Kurama the jerk....that's kinda funny ^-^ And I did see the tournament's end and it was cool! I love the song Unbalanced Kiss! "With my back pressed against the weight of the world....I held onto you, held onto you, held onto you with all my might. As I share an unbalanced kiss with you, I hope you can feel us getting closer to love..." Oh, sorry bout that! Anyway, ya gotta keep on writin! ~DWKitsune
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 21:23 CST
Comment/Review:
oh yes ive read ur other fanfic 2! this is really cool but i reeeeeally need Kagome and Kurama to start liking eachother! 0_0 Hiei's a perv??? Oh my god...0_o
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Reviewed By: Ayame X23 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it you have to update really really soon!!
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: Jessica Rose Kearney On: January 06, 2004 15:16 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't see the characters acting like this it's just too funny!!!
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