| "Glad as Hell you Woke Up!" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Badman08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 23:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
Badman08 I'm giving it an average rating because Aside from the overused Asuka/Shinji Parings, and nosebleed humor, what really struck me is the use of the words Baka, and Kawaii. Honestly they drag down the writing and are out of place no matter how you use them. The fiction was a decent read, work on your grammer and avoid the japanese words and you'll do fine.
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Reviewed By: Shisou Ikari On: July 12, 2004 14:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Heh, that last guy doesn't know what he's talking about. I think you did a good job. Lemons are good and all but it's much better when there's some real love in it. Frankly, that little ending suprised me and I thought it was very cute. Keep writing.
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Title: Prepare to have the taste slaped out of your mouth
Reviewed By: a lemon reviewer On: January 12, 2004 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
rrrrrrrg, i hate nosebleed humour its NOT funny when you read about it. I am all for asuka and shinji, all other pairings will die. I am sorry but looking at your last works, and this one, I would have to tell you to stop writing lemons. Your just not good at it.
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Reviewed By: Cl4yivi0r3 On: November 18, 2003 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It wasn't a bad fic, but the spelling really cut it down and snapped me back to reality. The story needs to flow more smoothly, and taking 5 seconds to run a spellcheck would bring it up to par. Still, it was a great fic. Your grammar is actually very well-phrased, but the spelling sucks.
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Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2002 21:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
more. me is not usually a shinji asuka fan, but anything evangelion will do now, and this pretty good... |
Reviewed By: death On: October 14, 2002 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's a great story that deserves a sequel, it has pretty bad spelling and at some points it would say Asuka or someone thought but not anything before or after |
