| "A good reason to be late,...again" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: AWESOMENESS!!
Reviewed By: blackroseyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2008 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Some people actually think that Ryo being controlling is too OOC. I beg to differ! It does get tedious when Dee is always the one in control. First fic in English? I seriously couldn't tell! Naughty Ryo!! Great job!
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Reviewed By: Daxemon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
For your first english fanfic. Great job. Keep it up, your pretty good.
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Reviewed By: Athena-Lee On: January 25, 2004 17:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I would say Yummy but someone already said that. It was delecious ok I cant spell. I really ove it when Ryo takes control. Keep writing
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Reviewed By: Mononokie On: January 23, 2004 16:07 CST
Comment/Review:
Ummm, yeah. What else would you write in? I mean, post in at least? But it was pretty good.
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Title: YUMMY!
Reviewed By: Wildefyre [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 08:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Very nice indeed! Of course I am a major fan of dominating Ryo! I don't believe that he would be happy in a passive role all the time. After all, he is a man and a strong one at that. Thank you for feeding my hentai mind with delicious thoughts.
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