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Title: Chibi!!!!!!
Reviewed By: fujinakaheero [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 19:35 CDT
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Hey! You have not finished this story, how could you leave it hanging?! *sobs* I wanted to know what was to happen next. Please start writing to this story again, 'tis so good and you cannot leave it hanging... pwwweeeaaasseeee! *does puppy eyes* I will write again if you don't update something soon! ok.. I'm sorry. TTYL Fujinakaheero
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Reviewed By: Chibi Cherrie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 01:45 CST
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Reviewed By: Ailime On: March 20, 2004 00:51 CST
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I find myself yett again agreeing with SomaliChan! Heero neds to ger over that cheating Duo and have a nice life with Wufei..Just look how happy Heero is just by being friends with him and Zechs. When he was with Duo he had no friends! Duo needs a reality chek...let him keep Hilde and be missreble!
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Reviewed By: Backward On: February 16, 2004 15:42 CST
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yayayayayayayayayayayayayayayayayayayayay!!!!!!!!!!! another chapter!!!!!!! yayayayayayayayayayayayay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ooooooo wufei much better then trunks >does a lil dance< are heero and wufei gonna get together?? whats gonna happen when duo finds out?? when heero sees heero again?? please please update again soon pretty please with a cherry and whipped cream ontop!!!! pleeeeease luv you forever >pout< >giggles and runs away
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Reviewed By: SomaliChan On: February 15, 2004 23:07 CST
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Well I was very sad to see how Duo had treated Heero. Duo really had something special with Heero. *sigh* Catching your lover in bed with another is a terrible thing. The nerve of Duo to try to even suggest that Heero should share him with Hilde! Wufei will be good for Heero. Glad to see their developing relationship. Hope that Heero will not do something stupid like going back to Duo.
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Title: Your Clown..
Reviewed By: siti On: February 15, 2004 22:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great new chapter, and i'm glad that this time it's a bit more longer than before. Wufei is a great choice for Heero to lean on to, for support, love, and courage in rebuilding his new life, and his next meeting with Duo. even though i was hoping you would use Zech, but oh well, Wufei is also a great match for our dear Heero, and maybe Wufei could deliver a scathing toungue lashing to Duo the next time they meet at Quatra wedding. i would Loooovvveeee to see what kind of "nice greeting" Wufei had in store for Duo, *evil-grins*... all in all, a great new chapter, i like it very much. keep-up the good work, and continue soon! {:D
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Reviewed By: Chibi Cherrie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 19:41 CST
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Reviewed By: Devina On: February 15, 2004 15:11 CST
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hun u know i luf u right?! OH GOD IT WAS GREAT! *jumps u and huggies* now is there gonna be 1x5 here or what *looks confused* anyhow *jumps up and down with way to much energy* u update sooner ne?! and try to get a bit better cuz we dont need you sick! *swat ur head* now up to bed u need rest and thinking * pulls u into a bed and makes cup of coco* REST!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: February 15, 2004 14:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh! Cool! This is actually the first fic where my suggestions have been taken into consideration. Wow! I feel special! But I wonder if Wufei's love will be unrequited or if a relationship will bloom between them? I could go on and on about this fic and what a great writer you are but I would never get around to asking for an update soon! LOL! Keep up the GREAT job.
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Reviewed By: Chibi Cherrie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2004 12:45 CST
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Title: Your Clown
Reviewed By: Tash Q. On: February 11, 2004 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Hee-chan. Great job on the fic thought! As for my opinion I think Heero should be paired with Kamui. Keep up the great job amd update soon please! :)
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Reviewed By: fujinakaheero [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2004 21:38 CST
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Hey I like this story, the first chapter was really sad, i swear i was about to cry, then again im a wuss sometimes. Anyways UPDATE!! please!!!!!!!! I'm gonna be waiting for an update in my mail and hopefully it comes soon!! Love the story though so far!! BTW... Can I kill Hilde cuz ya know i really do hate her!! grrr.... *gets gun out* tee-heehehehe
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Title: your clown..
Reviewed By: siti On: January 30, 2004 20:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAAAAHHH,...SSSuucchhh A SSShhhooorrttt CCChhhaappptteerrr??...*sniffles*..NNeeeeeddd, MMMooorreee, CChhhaaappptteeerrrssss, PPPPLLLEEAASSEEE????..*begging-with-puppy-dog-eyes* ^_^ and about your requesting who Heero should get close to next, HHHmmm,....how about sexy zechy?? i'm actually a big fan 6x1,....or maybe if it's from other anime bishi characters, errmm, how about Aioshi, Soujiro Seta, Hiko-Sama, or Kenshin from RK??...[these guys are my fav bishies from RK series,and sexy as hell, *swoon* and VERYYY SEME ne?..*giggles*] or maybe a strong female character instead, like either Noin or Sally just to piss Duo off more to see how a strong female character like both Noin and Sally can finally teach Duo a lesson or two on how to be loyal and devoted towards true love, and NOT to play around on Heero's gentle heart, *sniffles,sniffles* my poor sweet Hee-chan, *sob,sob*........*sniffles*... all in all, take your pick wisely, and make sure this time both Heero and Duo will finally make a change for the better of thier relationship and love for each other, they both deserves true happiness in life, especially my poor Hee-chan, *sniff,sniff*....keep-up the good work, and continue soon. i be waitting!
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Reviewed By: Chibi Cherrie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 18:48 CST
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Reviewed By: Backward On: January 29, 2004 14:37 CST
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oo i just read black bueaty's reveiw, and i think wufei would be a good choice too. cause he and heero arne't complete opposites but there different enough to have a very stable realastionship, plus there both warriors in spirit and complement each other really well. you can also use wufei's sense of justice as a reason for heero and duo getting back together. as wufei wouldn't allow himself to come between them if they really were in love. plus 5x1 is my fav pairing after 2x1 ;)
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Reviewed By: Backward On: January 29, 2004 14:32 CST
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>glomps< yayayayayayayayayayayayay >dances round the room< i love this fic soooo much ^^ umm i dunno who Heero could replace Duo with, cuase the only one of the guys listed i know is tenchi and i don't think he really suits Heero. maybe trunks from DBZ, older version of course ,sorry my mind is twisted ;) whoever you pick i can't wait for the next part!!!! >huggles
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: January 29, 2004 13:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I have read enough fics where Heero and Wufei become a couple because they are pretty much equals in the battle field. If you think about the fact that behind that sexy smirk, Wufei is also a scholar, he could very well be the kind soul that Heero needs to heal. They could be just true friends or sexual partners who decide to be eachother's comfort when they feel that they don't have anyone else to turn to. Plus not to mention the fact that Wufei is very passionate when he rants about justice. Can you just image how hot blooded he can be on the bed?! Anyways I truly hope you consider Wufei as my first choice guy, after all I really don't like crossover fics. BTW thanks for acknowledging my review. You are so kind. Keep up the great job and update soon.
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Reviewed By: Devina On: January 29, 2004 09:41 CST
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dont worry bout makin me cry...sometimes its good to be refresht with tears ne? anyway i luvt it...continiu soooooon!
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Reviewed By: Chibi Cherrie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 23:13 CST
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Reviewed By: Tash Q. On: January 26, 2004 19:04 CST
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I love your stories, they are really good! And please continue this story! (look at you with wide puppy eyes) Please?
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Reviewed By: bl On: January 24, 2004 15:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think you should continue the story, maybe have them meet again.
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