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Reviewed By: Reader-Lurker On: January 13, 2004 01:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it - loved it - loved it! This is needing MORE PLEASE! I think Wufei would be good for Heero and I agree with 'Hmm' This needs several parts but that makes it all the better! You made Duo a real ass so it is hard to feel sorry for him. Heero needs some time to heal and Quatra and Trowa would probably be a bad idea with them getting married and all. I cannot see the Heero you portray wanting to dampen their spirits with his pain. Then again there is also Zechs or Noin or Sally there are many possibilities - oh even Une @_@ MORE PLEASE
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Title: Hmm...
Reviewed By: Yira On: January 13, 2004 00:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Hn. I don't know if Duo really belongs with Heero in this. ~_~ He may love him, but that gives him absolutely no reason to hide a relationship with Hildie. At all. I applaud Heero's decision. With what you have, this story deserves more than just an epilogue. There's too many problems to solve and a lot of different ways to do it ^_^; To only have an epilogue would take away what you've done with this part. My suggestion: Do another chapter or two or however many you think would work. Have Heero go to Wufei's or Trowa and Quatre's. If you want to make the Heero and Duo pairing work out in the end, there's a lot of stuff to cover ^_^ Quatre could prolly help because he's snuggly and good at that kind of stuffs. Then again, Fei would be very blunt and smack Duo upside the head and rant at him. Make him face reality very hard and very fast. X.x Oy...don't mind me. I'm just...Thinking out loud really.
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Reviewed By: Backward On: January 09, 2004 16:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor Heero!! how could duo be such a pig?? ah well heero got his own back in the end. it was sooo sad though, and really well written, nearly started crying. oo please tell me your gonna do some more of the fics??
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Reviewed By: Devina On: January 09, 2004 00:04 CST
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i started to cry mid way this was so sad! poor Heero! argh! but it still is a good fic! *sob*
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Reviewed By: .none On: January 08, 2004 23:27 CST
Comment/Review:
awww sad but i liked it too! good for heero.^^
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: January 08, 2004 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
angsty, but great because you depicted Heero with a strong sense of conviction. The turmoil that he felt was so well described that it even made my heart churn in agony, almost experiencing that agonizing feeling. Keep up the GREAT job.
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