| "Life of a Demon" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: WARRIOR007 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 04:07 CDT
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Dude that story was awesome I just can't belive there's no more after the 11th chap, or am I looking in thr wrong place? Oh and I'm def interested in the pic of demon I'm a MAJOR dbz geek, I draw it play the game constantly and even know power levels by heart fom the raditz saga through the omega shenron battle (including the movies) and I ate your story up like a hungry fat man at a free buffet. So please please send the demon pic and update. Email: drsadvocate86@tmail.com P.s. Thank you for gracing us with a story of this caliber. Ferverently Lookin 4ward 2 more chapters.
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Title: Life of a demon
Reviewed By: Twin Tails Speed [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a excellent and a really interesting story so far.
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Reviewed By: Ecchi-Anbu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 00:31 CST
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Samurai Demon-God Sekikage here under a new name! Long time no see, why haven't you updated but for ONE chapter yet? I'm honestly disapointed with ya, I actually CRIED during the scene with June! (don't tell anyone I said that though) UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: budokifreak16 On: February 13, 2005 16:46 CST
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i personaly like this fic so if u want me to help with some ideas i will be happy cause this shows a lot of prtentnal
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Reviewed By: Lightstar On: October 22, 2004 16:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would have given a higher score but I'm afraid you've attacked the english language and the grammars on the ropes. Tidy that up and expand a bit more on descriptions and this could be quite a good story.
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Reviewed By: Wwolfeyes91 On: May 15, 2004 20:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good fanfic. I like it, but I'm very impatient and would like to see what happens as the story continues.Please hurry and finish as I may lose the internet soon!!!
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Title: Friend
Reviewed By: Boon the Butcher On: March 04, 2004 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Reminds me of my friend Tallow. Except Gohan is nicer... please continue.
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Reviewed By: Patiently waiting On: February 29, 2004 21:15 CST
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Please keep writing. This is easily the best gohan fic I've read in a good long time so keep the chapters coming.
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Reviewed By: roxworld2 On: February 04, 2004 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! Will the little girl ever show up again? I think she sounds cute. This is one of the better fics I have read. Thank for providing me with 20 minutes of procrastination (sp?) from my homework. Maybe I should get to it now?
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