| "Life of a Demon" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ecchi-Anbu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 00:31 CST
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Samurai Demon-God Sekikage here under a new name! Long time no see, why haven't you updated but for ONE chapter yet? I'm honestly disapointed with ya, I actually CRIED during the scene with June! (don't tell anyone I said that though) UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: budokifreak16 On: February 13, 2005 16:46 CST
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i personaly like this fic so if u want me to help with some ideas i will be happy cause this shows a lot of prtentnal
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Reviewed By: Lightstar On: October 22, 2004 16:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would have given a higher score but I'm afraid you've attacked the english language and the grammars on the ropes. Tidy that up and expand a bit more on descriptions and this could be quite a good story.
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Reviewed By: Wwolfeyes91 On: May 15, 2004 20:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good fanfic. I like it, but I'm very impatient and would like to see what happens as the story continues.Please hurry and finish as I may lose the internet soon!!!
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Title: Friend
Reviewed By: Boon the Butcher On: March 04, 2004 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Reminds me of my friend Tallow. Except Gohan is nicer... please continue.
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Reviewed By: Patiently waiting On: February 29, 2004 21:15 CST
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Please keep writing. This is easily the best gohan fic I've read in a good long time so keep the chapters coming.
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Reviewed By: roxworld2 On: February 04, 2004 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! Will the little girl ever show up again? I think she sounds cute. This is one of the better fics I have read. Thank for providing me with 20 minutes of procrastination (sp?) from my homework. Maybe I should get to it now?
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Reviewed By: de Metz On: February 03, 2004 14:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
...must...have...next... chapter...
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Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 14:49 CST
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This fanfic was fantastic! I loved your ideas and I think it's totally awesome that Gohan's been turned into a heartless monster!! (heh heh o_o) I look forward to a Gohan and Videl pairing. Great job!
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Reviewed By: tomgurl8901 On: January 26, 2004 19:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good fan fic! Evil Gohan is always a good idea. Please continue soon! I really wanna know what happens! ^_^
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Reviewed By: One_And_Only [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this and evil Gohan is always an awesome character. I was just wondering but it says that there will be romance in this right? Well with who? Gohan/Videl? Oh well. Keep up the good work and please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Shakar On: January 23, 2004 01:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome story, can't wait for the next installment!
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Reviewed By: Gofamofa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 23:35 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit that after reading the first chapter I was a little apprehensive whether to read the other 5-6 chapters. But now that I have; where Demon (Gohan) is fianlly on Earth and has met the Z Fighters or is it somebody else, I'm now busting to know what is going to happen next. Please update real soon, I'll be keeping a eye out.
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Reviewed By: sorceress_sarrkh [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 15:31 CST
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Finish it. Or die. :) I really love your ideas and I can tell that it's only going to get better from here. Your writing style could use some working on tho, but even so, keep it all up.
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Reviewed By: XZanayu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait to see what happens when Gohan returns to Earth! Please continue!
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