Reviewed By: Saekochan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 00:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Structure please!! You cant just have everything grouped into one long paragraph. Hit enter after every conversation/group of actions, ok? And work on the spelling. Good idea, tho.
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