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| "Close Relations" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Saru the black fox [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2009 15:14 CST
Comment/Review:
ok freak frist off post your yaoi under the genre yaoi. i don't want to have to see it when i looking under the genre w/o yaoi please and thankyou
| Reviewed By: Her [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 19:21 CST
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oh & my title, i ment 2 say im the real bloody_black_valentine & glasses freak b/c those were once my MM names, so. yeah, but i like the fic, sry, it seem i flamed ya huh? ^^'
| Title: the REAL
Reviewed By: Her [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 19:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
ok i had a few problems w/ this sry, thou it was good a story alright! U made ur character jade 2 unbelieve has a character, i didn't beleive she could make the others fear her tht way, it wasnt real or fitting in. tht was a main issuse, u keep say she could scare the other yet i can't c it, i find it annyoing kind of too, it always just made me roll my eyes when evr it happened, she really tended up mess ^ the story & put it out of blance after reading those parts. so, u have it where only MM memebers can comment, i pisses me when author do tht, it a hassle on me b/c MM has deleted me & when I try'd 2 re`redgister it wouldnt let me use the same email b/c sum1 was already using it, evn thou i've been "removed" 4 month, i im pissed w/ MM & the fact i cant comment on a lot of fics, sry this was harsh, but im an writer too & i pretty hard on detailing & editing, on my friends fic there are so many corrections, she got burn'd, lol don't take this the wrong w/ plz, i enjoy the fic but ya seriously need 2 tone down on the whole jade part
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