| "Samurai Sushi" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: SaturnFlight On: February 04, 2010 19:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Dono" does not mean "miss". It's an honorific used after a name for someone of much higher authority to whom one would want to show a great amount of respect. That's as far as I got before I couldn't read any more.
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Reviewed By: Anna May Dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 21:59 CST
Comment/Review:
i know it's been a while since your last review, but i just found this story and i really like it. i would really appreciate it if you updated the story. although, your use of japanese mixed in with english can be confusing. i can translate and understand what the words mean, but they just don't flow right in the sentances. another thing is you keep saying "stake", isn't it suppose to be "skate"? other then the two issues listed prior, i truly enjoy this story. please update.
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Reviewed By: Ohagi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 01:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Continue please! Until next time! Sayonara! - Ohagi-chan
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