| "A Precious Glimpse" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: free-sprit, not logged in. On: June 21, 2005 14:38 CDT
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okay, I just read this again, and sorreh, but I had to reveiw again! You might as well get used to me, 'cause I lovethis story. It's... It's... Perfect. And the conversation between Vegeta and Bulma at the end... Sooooo.... Funny! And again, yeah perfect. Geez, get a life Free-sprit! Why should I? what ise the use of a life? :P keep it up. luve it.
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 11:33 CDT
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That was so fun! The last part, I loved it. And it was so cute, the thing with Vegeta and Trunks. I loved it! Keep it up!!!
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Title: Really funny
Reviewed By: Sakiku (too lazy to log in) On: April 20, 2005 09:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol, that's a great fic! I think it's the only one I've ever read where Vegeta appears as a civilized individual (I'm talking about the not-blasting-Yamcha scene, it was hilarious). You portrayed a completely different Vegeta from the cannon, someone who can laugh, someone who can have fun without blasting anything, someone who can take responsibility for his child. The reason why I didn't give you full points on style of writing and grammar is that you've got a few sentences in there (especially in the first chapter) that were really confusing and were hard to understand. If you like to, I could point them out to you. But everything else really deserved the 10s it got. Oh, and by the way: could you perhaps mail me the link to stupid monkey? I'd love to read it. --~~Sakiku~~--
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Reviewed By: rainbowbrite1986 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 16:05 CDT
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I love your story! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 13:54 CDT
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Fun!!! This was a delightful vignette, and your narrative is very fluid. I want more! It's a real pleasure to see these delicate familial interactions. Everyone was in character and the descriptions were vivid. Send me the story you mentioned in the A/N! debbiechan shalombayit@juno.com
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: April 02, 2004 03:31 CST
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Update this please!
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Title: LisaB
Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 15:01 CST
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Oh, I love this! We get to see so little of "real life" in DBZ and we're all just dying for a peek. I loved the image of Vegeta playing on the floor with Trunks--I'll take that with me forever. Good work.
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Reviewed By: giggles101988 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 18:06 CST
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I read this like you asked me and I really enjoyed it. Nice job. Please update it soon. It drives me crazy to not know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Tsuyoku On: January 19, 2004 19:41 CST
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This is a funny story. And I can tell it's going to get better so update soon!
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Reviewed By: sethie On: January 19, 2004 16:23 CST
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This story totally rocks. I love the interactions between Trunks and Vegeta, and between Vegeta and the gang. Keep going b/c I can't wait to read it.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: January 18, 2004 03:42 CST
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Nice to see this on both sites. Keep updating.
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