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| "Helping Paws" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Title: I loved it
Reviewed By: Narakulover77 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 18:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this one shot. The only thing that could have been changed was the mating part. It was sorta too short. But other than that, it was wonderfully written. And now, I must do something. I do this for all the stories that I like. For the FLAMERS!!! It is called Fanfiction for a reason. If this author chooses to make Kilala into a male, that is their buisness. You all say males don't go into heat and flame this story...Well then, take your flames to all the other stories where the males go into heat and tell them it isn't possible. Fan fiction gives us the right to make any situation we want. If we wanted cannon we would read the comics. We have the right to do whatever we want with the characters. I have seen hundreds if not thousands of InuYasha stories where either InuYasha, Sesshoumaru or even Kouga go into heat. There is no where does it say, males can't go into heat. What do you think of all the gay animals out there and yes, there are gay animals in the real world. As for the reviwer who said this was sick. You had the button to click to exit the story. No one made you read it. IT should have been obvious what was going to happen when the author called Kilala a he. Don't read a story then say, this is sick, whenever you weren't forced to read it. Again, great story, wonderfully written. Ignore the flamers. They are immature and have nothing else better to do than trash someones work.
| Reviewed By: inufan@tenthplanetart.com On: August 23, 2004 03:51 CDT
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LOL Despite the fact that Kirara is a girl and you are getting flamed about that.. It was well written and err..creative license and all?
| Reviewed By: Azmidia On: March 31, 2004 18:48 CST
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you know, right after writing a possitive reveiw, i really hate to throw a flame at you, but that was just sick man. I cringed and got up for 2 minutes trying to compose my discust before finishing that story once i saw where is was going. that wasnt the 1st time i had done that with your stories either. and also, as was already said, Kirara is female. If that "situation" truly had to be done, you could have at least left her as she was. Oh well, enough bitching, whatever floats your boat.
| Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 23:41 CST
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listen i have NOTHING against yoai ... but kirara? i meen i would rather gage out my eyes then picture inuyasha fucking kirara! and its not like kirara even has a human for... if that was the case then i wouldnt care. but kirara? what the fuck where you thinking? i dont care how in heat someone is it dose not give them the right to fuck a cat! i know that you didnt want to hear this but i write in my reviews what i feel in the moment. thank you for saying that he would rather kagome. but right now i need to go through up! i never wrote a flame in my life. not even to some people that i thought d3esirved it. but this was descusting! i couldnt even get past the lime before i had to stop. why couldnt inuyasha fuck someone else? even the monk would have been better! i would rather jaken over kirara! fuck even shippo would of been better! but kirara?! i'm sorry that i had to say those things i truly am. but im my mind i had to choice. if you wanna yell at me through msn messenger or email do so. i deserve to be yelled at by you. inuyasha_1234@hotmail.com ja ne!
| Reviewed By: Lemony Fresh On: January 11, 2004 16:18 CST
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umm r u aware that Kirara is a female??...that was a very strange fic... O_O
| Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 10:05 CST
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also, I'm pretty sure Kirara is female, or else they wouldn't have changed her name to 'Kilala' (sounding like a demented musical note) when the so horribly dubbed it in the story. Also, Kirara is reffered to many times in the manga and the anime as 'She'. so, Kirara is female. not male. AND INUYASHA WOULDN'T BE IN HEAT BECAUSE HE IS MALE AND MALE'S DO NOT GO INTO HEAT!!! also, if you have a problem with my constructive criticism, please do not tell me about it by posting a review in one of my stories. Alot of people do that. now, if you want to actually review on one of my stories-please feel free to post a flame or any criticism you want. Contact my email if you want to rant at me, don't use my reviews because it'll just get taken down anyway.
| Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 10:00 CST
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Ok, i'm pretty sure that only females go into heat. The male's reaction to that is what makes them all crazy. Heat is the time when a female is fertile and with animals, they usually give off pheremones that alert the male of the species that rutting with them will produce offspring. so, i repeat MALES DO NOT GO INTO HEAT!!!! I've looked this up, an I know that MALES DO NOT GO INTO HEAT!!!! ONLY FEMALES GO INTO HEAT!!!!! I know that this is a popular theme for some lemon stories, but it's just physically impossible. And I know that the whole point of fan fiction is to explore new ideas, but it's like saying that Inuyasha is female. Which he is not. So, to sum it up: MALES DO NOT GO INTO HEAT, ONLY FEMALES GO INTO HEAT!!!!!!
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