| "Insatiable" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: smitten_kitten [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 00:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is great. very original beginning |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 22, 2002 08:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely. You are one of the best one-shot author's out there. Very intriguing this story is. I like, keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: sweet pinay On: January 21, 2002 01:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ur story was very steamy!I really think u should write more of v/b.It's whackin^_^ |
Reviewed By: The Stark [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2002 20:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow. That was really...intense. Actually, I thought the story was quite clever. I can see how Vegita would act if Bulma were ignoring him....and I thought you caught the character very well.
The phone and her resistence to his advancements was also quite funny...and well played.
Nice job...(uh, is it warm in here, or is it just me?) |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2001 23:30 CST
Comment/Review:
i've read a gazillion lemons... but this one just brought the heat up a hundred degrees!!! I've never read one this intense and detailed!
you're very good at this! |
Reviewed By: Eternal Serenity [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2001 13:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the way u described the detail...^_~ good job! |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl On: August 30, 2001 00:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
I have read this on another site...but i's damn good to read over and over! |
