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Reviewed By: neko hanyou On: August 31, 2005 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! The descriptions and characterization are completely in line with where our characters would be in this situation. You should continue writing fan fiction. It was a beautiful read.
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Title: no nit picking here :D
Reviewed By: Jade_Fighter On: November 01, 2004 17:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just want to say i love your story and i'm definitely not one to nit pick... your story was wonderful and i can't wait to see more work from you like this one. o ya and in a person's fanfic, THEY MAKE THE RULES! so i just wanted to say keep up the good writing! :D SAYONARA!!!!!!!peace out Jade
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Title: loved it
Reviewed By: holly [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 20:56 CDT
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i really liked it.. very good..
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Reviewed By: Jennlynn On: August 17, 2004 05:41 CDT
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Inuyasha has a one word response to everything...so I do too...beautiful. thank you for sharing this piece, very well done.
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 18:39 CDT
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"Defensible," not "defendable." * * * The image of the scorpion queen as a godly figure is very memorable. If the other scorpions had seen her that way, then it's easy to believe that they deified her. What's hard to buy is the sudden change of heart -- or at least of plans -- and that the act of jumping into the well with Kagome could cause it. If her wounds weren't fatal outside the well, why would they be inside? * * * I'm surprised that, "When did Kagome return from her homeland?" isn't included in Miroku's questions. * * * "Get down from there!" the monk insisted. Hee hee hee... MIROKU: Inuyasha, get off the couch! INUYASHA: No!
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Reviewed By: Starfire27 On: August 12, 2004 03:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I love the story. You were describeded in the story. The hole fan fic could of being at least 15 chapters bc the chapters were very long. But I like that ppl wouldnt have to wait for updating sometimes its annoying. Very good story. One of the best!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 09:09 CDT
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(Runs in wearing stolen University cheerleader's uniform) Gimme a K! Gimme an O! Gimme a U (but not in the Viz version)! Gimme a G! Gimme an A! LET THE GAMES BEGIN!! * * * Hmm... I wonder why Kagome's not asking more about Miroku and Sango. Even if she doesn't think it practical to try to get a message to them, I still figure she'd pepper Kaede and Inuyasha with questions about how they were doing. * * * I'm not too clear on what Kouga figured out. Why was Inuyasha going for the small kills again? And why leave the stags in the center courtyard with Kouga's -- I assume for the villagers to eat -- when he'd presented them to Kagome before?
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 08:27 CDT
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So far, all of the Kagome + Inuyasha stuff seems too easy. They retake to each other too quickly. Wouldn't there be at least some awkwardness? * * * Ordinary humans would not use the word "mate" so readily, I don't think, even if they did know a little bit about youkai. * * * Human births are not usually that quick. ...and they'd probably have told Inuyasha to scram. I could see Inuyasha being wowed by hours and hours of human labor, but not by this. Plus, human newborns often aren't cute right away; something about the plates in the skull shifting around. It takes a day or so for them to even out. * * * I seem to remember that Inuyasha was born in Kyushu -- one of the southwestern islands. So did his mother move or move back to Musashi after the Inu no Taisho died? * * * After more than fifty years, the room is "pristine"? At the very least, it would have a coating of dust. * * * All nits aside, I do like the scorpion queen. Her assumptions about hanyou and power are as chilling as her growing nest.
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 07:42 CDT
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Hmm... I don't know if Jii-chan is right about that one. Even if Inuyasha would eventually have forgiven her for leaving, I think he'd be pretty mad at the get-go. * * * A lot of the J-words get in the way of the story. Sure, "sayonara" means "farewell" in Japanese, but "goodbye, mom," would probably be more moving (and remind me less of the Ninja Turtles). * * *
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Title: Bond of Blood
Reviewed By: Sakura Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OKay. This was by far one of my favorite InuYasha fan fics. But, at the last chapter at the end there was a mistake. Tokyo wasn't called Tokyo until 1868. At the begining of the Meiji Era, some 500 years after your story took place. Before that, it was called Edo. Just thought I'd clear it up.
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Reviewed By: Loveleen On: April 02, 2004 00:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gosh!!! such a wonderful fic, shame it had to end...
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Title: tre bien
Reviewed By: Fluer On: April 02, 2004 00:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed your writing. Please, write more, you're very good at it.
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Title: Joy!!
Reviewed By: Angelic lil Angel On: April 02, 2004 00:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehhehehhe i looooooved it!!!! bleeeeeh you are so col
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Title: five stars!
Reviewed By: Star L. M. On: April 02, 2004 00:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just want to let you know that your story was awesome. And i've read A LOT of fics. Keep writing.
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Title: WAAAAAHHH
Reviewed By: Jackie(classic girl) On: April 02, 2004 00:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoO whyd it hafta EEEEENNDD! im gonna go cry now k????
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