| "Dark Alley" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Pretty cool ^ ^
Reviewed By: DieTryin116 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall, I liked it. A lot. ^ ^ Marik was a little OOC for my tastes, and the grammar and sleepling could use a fix, but other than that it's good. Keep writing! ^ ^ -Luv CiJay
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 03:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Um, ok...Wow... This was intersting. Although your grammar needs a major tune up! That and you should warn readers when your fic borders on rape... Even if it does end up with the 'victum' enjoying it... SOme readers get offended by such things and need to be warned.
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Reviewed By: the twited bich from hell On: February 20, 2004 21:04 CST
Comment/Review:
good pain and plasher... I have no more to say
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Reviewed By: Moan my name the hentai On: February 15, 2004 04:53 CST
Comment/Review:
Stupid Marik, he enjoyed being bitten and glasses digging into him.
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