| "Tempest's Story" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: SapphireGems On: October 16, 2004 20:13 CDT
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lol.
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 19:03 CDT
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this is good. plz update soon.
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Reviewed By: Bandersnatch On: September 10, 2004 21:09 CDT
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Wow, i didn't think you'd ever come back. But you did! YAY! I really like your story. Tempest is such a great character. And really i understand the time its taken. I feel teh same way when i'm writing. And then there's finding time to write... Well, anyways, i'm glad to see that you havn't abandoned it... especially now that it's getting so exciting. ~Alice (18) NY
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Reviewed By: Bandersnatch On: September 10, 2004 21:08 CDT
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Wow, i didn't think you'd ever come back. But you did! YAY! I really like your story. Tempest is such a great character. And really i understand the time its taken. I feel teh same way when i'm writing. And then there's finding time to write... Well, anyways, i'm glad to see that you havn't abandoned it... especially now that it's getting so exciting. ~Alice (18) NY
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Title: lmao!
Reviewed By: femme On: March 13, 2004 21:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was really great! I also reviewed it on ff.net! lol, I love that line "I really envy that branch"...he's such a jackass in a box! anyway, go on with no. 12! this story is hilarious!
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Reviewed By: Bandersnatch On: February 08, 2004 15:03 CST
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i love the new additions to the story. Can't wait to see where all this goes.
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Reviewed By: Shadows On: February 06, 2004 13:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was excellent, I loved it. Please keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Bandersnatch On: January 17, 2004 14:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its not the best i've ever read, but a female dragonslayer is very creative. I can't wait to read the next installment.
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Reviewed By: DC On: January 16, 2004 20:36 CST
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This is great! Can't wait to read more.
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