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Reviewed By: Yami_Haruko_San-not logged in On: August 19, 2004 12:58 CDT
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This is a great fic. I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: anubiset On: June 01, 2004 17:17 CDT
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I love this. Hope the rest of the chapters are up soon.
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Title: Good very Good
Reviewed By: desiivy1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 20:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an incredible piece of utter smut. Thank you so much. Chapter one, was so HOT. The humor was well placed. I was rolling. My husband even read it. Normally he will just get few lines into what ever I am reading turn red and walk away shaking his head at me. This time he read the whole chapter then smiled at me and walked away. Chapter 2 was good too but I prefer the first. I do thank you for the notes at the start of the chapter. I am new to this fandom I wasn't sure of all the names I see only the American Dubbed shows, I have noticed many authors prefer to use the original Japanese names instead of the ones I have seen on my T.V. I know most but, I didn't have any idea who Otagi is either. So, thank you for clearing that bit up for me. I can't wait until you update again. ~Ivy~ Oh, yeah I am also RECing this story to my Blog. More people need to read this, I think. If you want to check it out email me. I'll send the URL. Now, go on write then next chapter already!!! Seto/Joey, That should be interesting.
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Title: ^__^
Reviewed By: moon_raven On: March 01, 2004 01:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woot! *fans self and hops into a tub of ice*... . That was *ahem* good grammar...yeah, that's it. ^__^ . . . . . . I've never eventhought about this pairing before but you've made them very appealing. ^^ Can't wait to see what you'll do with Jou and Seto. . . . . Ja!
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Title: A Domino Effect
Reviewed By: Nenya85 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was soooo hot. It's not a pairing I usually consider, but you do Ryuuu so well -- you've really caught his sense of humor. The lemon was so good, and I'm amazed at how long you kept it going (excuse the pun). Ands of course I can't resist the humor. The lemon was so sexy, but they were in this ridiculous cave the whole time. and I may never look at a bottle of sunscreen without laughing.
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Reviewed By: celia On: February 29, 2004 15:13 CST
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woohoo! yay for ryou and bakura! those sexy bitches, lol. XD you write good yami, lol. very hot. XD XD please, continue!
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Title: *thumbs up*
Reviewed By: samurai-ashes [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 22:51 CST
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you! rock my socks! XD but you know that. ^^ lol, no pressure, yo. anyway, figured I ought to review, since i enjoyed this so much and finally have somewhere to review. :) - ashes -
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Title: "I'm lovin' it!"-McDonald's line!
Reviewed By: Seto_YamiMyLovers [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 21:05 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah.Very nice.Very nice indeed.*Wink* Yami was so kawaii growing with irritation as Bakura was fucking Ryou on the couch.I apologize for my language.Very ammusing and funny.I just don't know who Otagi is.And that's all.Make Seto and Jou be together,please? They are kawaii! -^_^- Ja ne! Harika Huynh P.S. "I'm lovin' it." Hehe.
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Title: *cough* *cough*
Reviewed By: ^_^'' moon_raven On: January 23, 2004 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*ahem* That was...er...wow...something else, ne? I have no idea who some of them were but man, who the hell cares! I would like for you to hurry and continue this very much. What does Ryou and Bakura have in mind? Are they going into the matchmaking business? My favorite line? "Listen, thief, you can not give Ryou a blow job all over Grandpa's couch!" *giggles* And you write one sexy Yami, I tell you. ^_~
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Reviewed By: al On: January 17, 2004 19:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its one of those fics that make me have the 'where do they come up with this stuff' expression. i type in awe. or something like that.
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Reviewed By: Saiyamaru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 02:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol. Very nice. ^-^ Very nice indeed. Please update soon, I asure you, any and all updates will be more then happily recieved. Ja -^____^-
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Reviewed By: alostblackcat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 17:41 CST
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please please update soon and get seto and jou together
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Title: StarHoshi
Reviewed By: StarHoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 08:29 CST
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Wow. Thats all I've got to say. Wow.
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Reviewed By: Technical Dragon On: January 13, 2004 22:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleaze update!!!
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Reviewed By: Nenya85 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2004 21:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very sexy, especially the Bakuras. And Yami's growing frustration was great. What I didn't expect was the humor -- like when Yami remembers that Darkness isn't a name, or Kaiba announces that he's the champ, since everyone else has forfeited. And I loved the touch of angst, curtesy oof Kaiba, of course.
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