| "The Blood of Anubis" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Oh wow
Reviewed By: blue_limpet666 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 09:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow, You nearly had me crying at the end of the chapter, just because that song is so fitting, and I could really imagine Ryou singing it as his last song. It's so emotional and every scene you wrote i could imagine with such clarity in my mind. It's a truley awesome ff and I hope you write more of it soon.
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Reviewed By: Dark Moon Empathy On: February 29, 2004 12:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story! This story restored my faith in fanfiction ;__; [to many cliched plots... pairings etc] Ok you asked 4 us to guess on Malik's 'Feelings' Ok I believe he's using the whole 'dirty whore' thing to hide the fact that he's just fallen madly in love with the cute lil fucker [well he is a whore...] and that he wants to be his [Ryou's] sex-slave [I WANT A MALIK SEX SLAVE... OR A RYOU LIKE MASTER!!!] and feed him jam doh-nuts aaaalll day an since he's a psycho... moosh Ryou into a Jam dohnut... and eat him [mmmm Ryou doh-nut].... But i would prefer Malik to just wanna hurt Ryou and have him at his feet... Broken... Bleeding... cuz I Love my fave characters gettting hurt and Ryou is by far my fave ~coughs~ i think I'll go now UPDATE Loves Ya Muches oODark Moon EmpathyOo Ps: The Beginning was da BOMB!!! Ryou died ~Sniff~ and i whoo hoo-d -.- PPS: I was listening to 'Miss You Love' by Silverchair and found the lyrics kinda fitting -Remember today I've no respect for you And I miss you love And I miss use love I love the way you love But I hate the way I'm supposed to love you back-
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Reviewed By: Sheamaru-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 16:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey I really still like your fic and think you should keep going!!
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Reviewed By: Sheamaru-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 15:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful, please continue
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Reviewed By: Shadowfax01 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 16:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Ooooh...very nice ^_^ My guess would have to be Marik, me thinks. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Technical Dragon On: January 13, 2004 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great!!! Pleaze update!! My guess is Bakura!
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Reviewed By: cosmobunny [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2004 17:40 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow... that was good, except for the fact that it ENDED!!! UPDATE SOON!!! Please?
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