| "More Than Meets The Eye" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 06:20 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is a really good story. You should think about finishing it. I really enjoy the role Vegeta is playing and is I like how he's not falling for the 'onna' just with one kiss. Please update.
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Reviewed By: vegetaspixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 21:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*takes a deep breath* .... UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE!!!!!! You are doing such a great job! I know it makes awhile to make the next chapter...But, keep it up! I want to give you some encouragement because your doing awesome and I check my e-mail every day to see if you have updated! Sugoii! Great! Awesome!
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Reviewed By: lil_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 20:26 CDT
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I think we all know how this story will turn out. Just a suggustion though, maybe when V/B relationship heats up, try to get Vegeta to deny his feelings towards Bulma. I mean, make it dark and very very painful. That should be cool. Also, I'll be looking forward to reading more and how this story will turn out, especially with the plot those two are at.
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Reviewed By: The_Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man that is by far my favorite story that I have read so far. I can't wait to see what happens next. I didn't think that Bulma would of let him do anything that was that big in public. They sure do know how to get revenge.
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Reviewed By: blacktigeress On: May 10, 2004 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this alot i can't wait for you to update and take you time slow and steady win the race or in this case the fans
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Reviewed By: vegetaspixie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 19:43 CDT
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I luuuurve this fanfic! Hurry up and update! Your writing is very good, but Vegeta is sometimes a little ooc....but thats probably because i couldn't imagine Chris Sabat saying some of those things! lol. Well, he reminds me of the japanese version veggie...more of a mysterious and proud kinda guy...*giggles* @ a couple moments in the story, like when that "VEGETA?!" thing happened! I had to get up and do some yoga to calm down...I was like, "YAY! YAY! BEAT THAT YAUMCHA!". Well, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Nsbvegeta(not Logged in) On: April 11, 2004 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HIYA! Its NSBVEGETA I loved this fics Idea and we have something in common ...... I absolutely despise YAMCHAS worthless hide ^_^ YUP I do indeed.....The idea seems lovely and damn that last chap was HOT Dont we all wish to be kissed like that damn iT! and by GETA no LESS double damn iT! LOL Well I would love for u to continue this story and if ya need help ring me LOL Later and PLEASE I want a LEMON HERE IM ANXIOUS! >:)
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