| "Lay with Me" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
Title: loved it
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 00:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wonderful lemon. I really could image that it was really them in character. I loved the part where they almost got caught. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 05:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
That is so sweet.I loved it!! Keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2005 22:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was really sweet and romantic and it didn't even matter that Kagome was a little OOC. I think I'm going to go read "In A Different Light' again until you update "A House Divided".
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Reviewed By: ShinseiShinja On: February 19, 2005 13:01 CST
Comment/Review:
niiiiice. heh heh... :P
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Reviewed By: skaterpg guy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 22:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not the most original fic ever. But still great! The WHOLE house huh? Nice.
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Reviewed By: gittelbug(when signed in) On: August 07, 2004 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inu and Kag are in charater the entire time.. I love this fic! it's great when her mom comes!! good stuff
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Reviewed By: dark ice13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 10:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor kagome she woke up the whole house but yeah the story was awsome
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Reviewed By: Hanyou_swimmer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 00:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, this is great! you should continue it, maybe what happens when they get back to the feudal era. I'd read it!
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Title: kool!!
Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 10:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2004 02:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow ^^; Great job! Heh, I really enjoyed that. I liked how you wrote it :)
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Reviewed By: Shizukesa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 21:32 CST
Comment/Review:
This was truly amazing! Wow, got me all excited! Keep 'em coming cuz this one hit the spot! Perfect! Truly... incredible!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_For_Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 20:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Damn that was close!!!!! The whole house huh? That was one of the best lemons I have ever read!!!!Good job!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Fire_star_mistress85 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 03:34 CST
Comment/Review:
whew that was close! I thought her mom was going to bust in. Good story.
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Title: Lay with me
Reviewed By: Karenalynn On: February 07, 2004 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought it was great because u showed a lot of imagination, creativity, and it was original.
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Reviewed By: Ymanetta [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2004 20:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so sweet and cute.
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Reviewed By: Dragon's Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 04:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow. That is actually really inspiring. I'm scheduled for an upcoming lemon, but it's starting off slowly. That was REALLY inspiring. What I mean to say is. . .Wow. I'm hot, and I'm pretty sure my Hershey bar melted. . .Oh well. Liquid chocolate works, right? Hmm. . .Ideas come only in the sleepless hours before dawn, doesn't it? 3am exactly. I hope to find some other of your works. We'll see. 9 for the fact that I write and like to read a lot of description, as much into thoughts and feelings as physical situations, although your style feels about the same. Not long, overdone, pointless sentences that eat up space, but short descriptions that show off how little one thinks in the throws of passion. Lovely.
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Title: Orb
Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 23:27 CST
Comment/Review:
The whole house huh? I've done that lol. *drools* but not with Inuyasha *pouts*. Kagome seemed really ooc at the beginning and stuff and it was weird but it turned out really good. I really liked it.
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Reviewed By: RoseInuYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2004 14:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow ^_^ this was really good. i can't wait to read your other work.
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Reviewed By: Mitsue-chan On: January 17, 2004 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! So sweet, everything was perfect, you're a amazing writer.
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Reviewed By: Relix On: January 13, 2004 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The whole house... that was priceless, lol :) You're really good, i loved this!
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Title: ^_~
Reviewed By: MidNight-Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 16:04 CST
Comment/Review:
he iS good the whole house^____~ keep writung that was amazing^__^
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