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Reviewed By: blur On: March 09, 2004 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn...they were all so ooc...he was so mean! he tried to kill her?! geez...
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Reviewed By: PJ On: January 22, 2004 00:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Great update even if it is a bit OOC it is still great. Is there going to be more? Please say there is Thanks for explaining about the spell thingy. In the series Keade put a spell on a rosary that was put on Inuyasha. The spell works only for Kagome all she has to say is 'sit' and he goes flat on his face. Just a little note about it for you. anyway I how there is more update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: INUYASHA NSI On: January 17, 2004 14:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it, but as someone said they are really ooc. but i can't complain because that is what fics are really about. taking a different situation and incorporating it into this anime. by the way kagome is spelled kagome and inuyasha'a sword is spelled tessiguia.
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Reviewed By: Satine On: January 17, 2004 13:28 CST
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ohhh im so glad that u updated! ohh inuyasha was being so nice i loved this chappie please update again!
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Reviewed By: Nevaeh On: January 15, 2004 22:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i think that this is a great fan fic so far! and please i want you to hurry and write another chappie! your doing a great job!!
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Reviewed By: AinsLeigh On: January 14, 2004 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked your story a lot so far please continue. why is kagome so sick? and why is inuyasha being so distant to her? please update !!!!
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Reviewed By: jammiesMM On: January 13, 2004 20:48 CST
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Hey this is good please add the rest I am #5 YAY!! That means you will post the next part right? But I am not doing this so you will post the rest I am reviewing because this is good and wanted to tell you.
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Reviewed By: PJ On: January 13, 2004 20:46 CST
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Well this sounds good please post the rest. What is up sith Inuyasha pushing Kagome so much anyway. Are they not close in this fic does she not have the "sit" spell she can use? Again update soon.
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Reviewed By: pink twilight On: January 13, 2004 20:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it a lot inuyasha is being mean tho but i still like it please update as soon as u can !
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Reviewed By: sesshiesbabe101 On: January 13, 2004 17:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i dont care what the other person said...i love it!!!pleaz keep it up!!!!!
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Reviewed By: anonymous3 On: January 13, 2004 14:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
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This is not like the series at all. Neither Inuyasha nor Kagome are acting like they do in the series. I don't like it.
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