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Title: y.a.17
Reviewed By: yamialex17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 14:47 CDT
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dude that's was such a tease chapter i loved it (4)so far it my fav chapter oh if there's more stories like this from you pplz tell me i'm yamialex17 bye
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Reviewed By: Amiira Avi On: May 07, 2004 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*falls over twitching* Ack! I cannot believe that you don't have something like 400 reviews or so already! You totally deserve 'em, that's for sure! Wai. This fanfic is amazing. It's not some dull, common PWP (porn without plot), as so many fanfics are in this day and age. The lemons weren't so long that they became unnefective, but not so detailed that they made the reader feel uncomfortable. You've come up with a different plot line, but not one that was so off course that the reader cannot picture the characters actually in this situation. You ended the story well, and didn't rush through the story so quickly that it didn't make sense. Some stories are so long and descripive that they dull the reader, but this held my attentions and made me sit up and pay attention throughout. Commendable! In my ratings, I'm extremely critical, and normally rate fics (even if they are VERY good) at the highest, an eight or nine. Wai, but this time, I could NOT honestly say that this fic deserved anything below a 10 in every section (I noticed a couple of spelling mistakes, but those were just tiny mistakes eg. 'to' rather than 'two', and such.) As I said previously, I am amazed that this fanfiction hasn't earned 400 or so reviews already. Absolutely amazing work. I suppose I should shut up now. -_-' Congrats on the completion of the fic, Amiira Avi
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Reviewed By: DeathGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was very good!! ^_^ The best yaoi fanfic of Beyblade I've read!! Keep writing and making more fanfics. Be happy(unlike me)x_x Rock On!!
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Title: have you ever
Reviewed By: I am the death of real On: April 28, 2004 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is beautiful. Its simply fantastic. Can't wait for the sequel. Cheers to you!
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Title: inulover16
Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm almost done reading the fic and have to say that i can't wait to get home to read the rest. this is my first bay fic I have read and i want to thank you for writing such an amazing fic. i have now decide to read the rest of your fics and other bay fics...ja ne
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Title: Have you ever
Reviewed By: Dragona15 On: April 22, 2004 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG DAMN KALI UR SO DAMN GREAT!!!!!! THIS ISH SO COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!! SO SWEET! SO BEAUTIFUL SO CUTEY!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sniffles* I LUV IT GURL!!!!!!! CANT WIAT TA SEE DA SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YYYYYYYYYYYYYIIIIIIIIIIHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!! YEAH!!!!!!!! U ROX UR FICS ROX EVERYTHING ROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOX!!!!!!!!!!!!!^^****************************AWWWWWWWWW !!!!!! SOS WEET WHEN KAI PUT HIMSELF ON HIS KNEES AND ALL!!!!!!! *cries* KIDO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: *sniffles!*
Reviewed By: CrazyJen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 12:52 CDT
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UWAAA!! The end!!! *sniffle...CRIES!!* Mou such a wonderfull ending to such a wonderfull fic! *superglomp* Mn i cant believe its really the end................:( .....................BUt that lemon sure was hot and and OMG the last bit with kai.on his knees!!!!!!! on his KNEES!!!!!!! AAAW uwa thats sooooo great! yeah! *sniffle sniffle* Okay hum............*huggles* No thanks really!!! I loved this story so much and you are one of my best buds on msn!! so. tweas my honour! lol hahhahaha Okay stoppin now.......................CANT WAIT FOR THE SEQ!!!!!! Jen
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Reviewed By: Kai-lovr On: April 22, 2004 02:57 CDT
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Hi, I remember reading this on fanfiction.net. When I found out it was gone, I was really peeved off since I didn't know what happened, but when I found it again, I was so happy. I absolutely love this fic. You're doing a sequal aren't you? If you do, could you post it on both Fanfiction.net and Mediaminer? I hope you can. I loved both Kai and Tyson in this fic. Driger was so funny in my opinion and during the middle of the story, I loved the little complication between Rei and Max, that was funny. I loved all the bitbeasts' personalities and all the characters' personalities. I loved the whole fic! Well I hope your sequal comes out soon (if your doing one)! Your lemon scenes were great by the way! ^_^ Could you please email me at: kai_lovr@hotmail.com when you post your sequal up? I'd be heaps happy if you could. Thanks.
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Title: The heat is about to break.
Reviewed By: Sweetdeily [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 02:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to be honest with you, Kali-san, I only started reading this when someone had the sheer audacity to mention your story and mine as being the two best Beyblade stories she'd ever read. Well. Your story (I've only gotten through 10 chapters so far, bare with me, I'm not the world's fastest reader,) is amazingly well written, the couplings are fresh and inventive and the humour is straight to the point and dazzling, the angst is just dandy and the personalities are cute and understandable. The only thing I've found wrong so far is the fine lack of detail in scence setting. You're build up of suspence is killing me and I can't wait to find out what happens when all hell breaks loose. Now here's the real meat; you've gotten my fire boiling, Kali-san, and it's at a pretty high temperature, you've got the talent that makes me itch to know who'se better, you or me? I like your writing style, and I can see why it's so highly praised, but on that level, I wonder if some friendly competition wouldn't make you glow with all the Powers of the Pen combined. I like your style enough to want to do better, something not many people invoke in me. But I wonder if I could. You're truly brilliant, Kali-san, and I hope you accept this little challenge... but for the moment, I have a hot little story with your name on it, begging for me to finish reading. Keep up the awesome and inspiring work!
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Title: *sniffle*
Reviewed By: CrazyJen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 14:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
* And the mighty phoenix will arise from his ashes once again!! AAW KALI *glomp* This was such a NICE chappy O_O omly one more????? aaaw man *bawls* thank god u really gunna write that sequel ne??????? Yay thats good cannt wait for that and the last of this HYe adventure!!! Jen
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Reviewed By: chione On: April 15, 2004 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah! ur ending it!? why!? its too good to end! seriously! its a great story!
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Title: O_O
Reviewed By: CrazyJen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 05:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oi DIZZI????????? OMG so cool!!!!!!!!!!!! But *teary eyed* Whats gunna happen to TY??? Not what i think its gunna happen ne????? *uwaa!!* er you had better update the next part of tyhis chap!!!!!!!!! fast I wanna read more!!! Jen
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Title: Nice chaopter!
Reviewed By: Jen*too lazy to log in* On: April 10, 2004 22:02 CDT
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AAAw the guys are soooo sweeet!!!!!!! Ginny must ve been really hapopy! But uh i dun get the thing you told me in msn chat@_@ You gunna tell me!!1 ima make you!!!! LOL Cant wait for the next chapters, *interested grin* Keep going, ya doing so gooooooood!!!! Jen
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Title: DELISH!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: CrazyJen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 11:24 CDT
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Oh man sooooo good!!!!!!!!! *drools* yay you rock kali!!!!! Wahoo!!!!! yayayaa That lemon was so unbelievable HOT! i swear *ish a puddle of goo on the floor now* Mand uwa cant wait for the next this story is so cool!!!!! Keep it up! Jen
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Reviewed By: Hikari Salima On: April 04, 2004 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best fic I have ever read in my whol life I just love it, it's a great story and I just love Tyka to bits, this story has everything I have ever wanted in it. I can't wait until the next chapter and good, hot, juicy Tyka lemon I hope. And for the finale I can't wait that long for it, I hope you update soon and write a sequal to it as well. Once again I really love this story, you have so much talent you could go far. Salima
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