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Reviewed By: Waterfall On: February 08, 2004 14:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really do like this fic. I don't normally review, but I wrote a story, and it is disheartening that I haven't recieved any reviews yet so I know how it feels to be ignored. I like the way you've left your options so you can go in many different directions. I'm going to enjoy seeing where you take this fic. Good luck and I hope you get a lot of reviews.
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Reviewed By: lonewolfstar7 On: February 08, 2004 11:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Kawaii!!! Update soon
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Reviewed By: Jam-Jam On: February 02, 2004 08:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really, overall 9.5 but thats not on there. I really do like this story. It's a very creative idea, and like to see where you are taking it. I think I'd like to see more of their powers and the solid bitbeasts. It's interesting and you could do a lot with it. You don't have to mention sex in every chapter unless it's is part of the story in an important way. We can be happy with a good story without tons of lemons. I think I've gone on too long so good luck and I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: The-Black-Tiger On: January 30, 2004 05:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This ia a pretty cool story, awsome work.
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Title: Good job!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Game girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2004 20:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'v read all of ur story and I think it's the greats I'v ever read (and I'v read a lot of FF) lol. Ur story is one of the storys that u have to find out what happens next so its good that u didn't live it incomplete. O and I really liked how u hade those conversations at the beginning and end
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Reviewed By: X::Synthetic_Darkness::X On: January 16, 2004 16:29 CST
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Got tired of FF.net. Nice fics, And what you told about seme/uke I really like it. It show me some other way and truly, this is great. U RULE !!!
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Reviewed By: Lrigelbbub On: January 14, 2004 22:11 CST
Comment/Review:
It's wicked Kali - sorry to hear about your being booted from ff.net and losing all of those reviews>.< but nice work, HYE is an excellant fic^^ be safe -BG
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Reviewed By: CCPheonix On: January 14, 2004 04:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally found you^^ If it wasnt for the fact that I get all the Tykahotness e-mails, I wouldnt ^^ But this is a great chapter ^^ ::wails:: I cant read your fics yet! ::cries:: I have to wait TWO WHOLE WEEKS until I can connect back to the internet at h9ome. and then maybe...I could join Tyakhotness properly. Hmm. Oh well. Great chapter. Me likey very much.
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Title: I love it sooo much!
Reviewed By: Freak_on_a_Leash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 02:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Sooo much..great job..I haven't had enough sleep so this is making me more hyper and insane heheheheheheh.But I love it and I'm wondering have other people been reviewing for this yet? If not then I'm shocked...well...yeah...uhh...don't know what to say...but GREAT JOB!I only got to the third chapter yet I love it already..I'm going to read more now GReat Job again ^__^
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