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| "Easy To Pretend" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: soso
Reviewed By: Spirit Bagel of Death [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 11:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was okay. The third person presant tense has always been akward for me to read and to write...I wonder why you chose it? Also, I think you made Yusuke a bit too articulate and open with his feelings, but that's how he is in the J-dub. Still, I think that's only because the subtitle people don't know how to translate Japanese slang. Other than that, the general concept was good, and everyone was basically in character. I found myself caring about Yusuke's plight, which is rare in this type of one shot. Keep writing.
| Reviewed By: tsunami-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 22:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wai! this fic was so nice...im surprised that im the first to review, it really is a very good story, i even added it to my favorites. i went to look for the continuation 'The Feeling's Mutual'but i couldnt find it. has it not been written yet? if not please write it and post it. i would really like to read it. i'll be looking for it ^^ if u dont plan on posting it could u e-mail it to me? acofi5@aol.com bye UPDATE soon!
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