| "Working Up a Lather" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Mel_One_Half [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 16:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Interesting... I'd like more Ryouga/Shampoo fics... there aren't many of them... :S
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Reviewed By: Scyggy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 00:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very nice. Very hot. This is one of those lemons which, if continued, make it a free-for-all for pairings, which is nice. It doesn't seem you'll write more, but if you do, I'll greatly appreciate it.
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Reviewed By: iatnehfognik [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 04:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
for some odd reason i just cant picture ryouga and ranma togethor..fucking each other's brains out...other than that it was fantastic...still can be improved and u need to update soon.
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Reviewed By: Guy who reads lemons too much On: May 27, 2004 09:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is pretty good. Keep writing more chapters, i like the Ranma-chan/Ryoga pairing because i'm just weird like that. Keep up the good and Lemony work. And make the sex between Ranma-chan and Ryoga more romantic and discriptive. Please?
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Reviewed By: Souichiro On: January 19, 2004 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad...not bad at all. Very hot in fact. There've been too many Ranma/Akane, Ranma/Other girls lemons, yet not so many Ryoga ones. I'd like to see more of this continued. Preferably more Ryoga/Shampoo, some Ryoga/Ukyo sounds good as well......maybe even both! (Everyone likes a good threesome) ~_^
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Reviewed By: DJ On: January 17, 2004 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very amusing.
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Reviewed By: Jason1 On: January 13, 2004 20:44 CST
Comment/Review:
Reformat. As soon as I saw how messed up the format was, I decided not to read this.
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