| "Shiver" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Shiver
Reviewed By: Kawaii Nai [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2005 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story. The author was able to pull off a deep and meaningful interaction between the characters in a one-page story. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: killsims [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 23:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Good! Not only do we get lemon, but angst as well, which happens to be the best genre ever created. You seem to have a really good feel for how Subaru's mind works, very convincing!
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Title: Heh heh...
Reviewed By: Veil Kuro [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 00:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everybody loves Subaru X Seishirou smut. And all of us admit that we're here for the smut and not for the plot, right? But it's well-written smut. You have a good feel for this sort of thing. Raking teeth down a spine is a nice picture. I commend.
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Reviewed By: Isabeau On: July 08, 2004 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good! I love this couple, and you really have a feeling for writing them... Awww!
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Reviewed By: Isabeau On: March 20, 2004 17:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic, good work! You wrote Subaru's thoughts quite well. Your story now belongs to my overall favourites:-)
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Title: so sad!
Reviewed By: Sweets On: March 20, 2004 02:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Poor Subaru! If only he knew what was going to happen the Se-kun!!! *goes off to cry in a corner*... Anyway! This was wonderful, it made me catch my breath a few times, which was pretty good. ^^ I loved the first person POV, it was good, soooo good! Hope to see more soon!!! ^^
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