Reviewed By: A. Lioncourt On: August 22, 2004 21:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this fic despite the spelling and grammar because you seem to have a natural knack with words. You kept it simple and concise for the most part which strengthened the emotional effect. Also, the words you chose flowed well and had a lyrical quality to their construction. Normally, I immediately stop reading a fic if there are consistent errors, but I am glad I did not. If you would like a beta, I would gladly volunteer. Please take this in the helpful and complimentary spirit in which it was meant. - Arashi Lioncourt, who has forgotten her password and does not feel like retreiving it at the moment.
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