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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2009 15:49 CST
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this was a great story, i hope you post an epilogue or sequel soon
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Reviewed By: Emerald x Lightning [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 19:12 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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My goodness, this was such an amusing fic! Even though it's been...two years since you finished writing it...i still think you should write an epilouge. This story was just so amazing! I've never seen anything like it, in the sense that someone should've thought about the entire "slave market" thing, with all the adult writers there are for YYH. I congradulate you on this wonderful work, and sincerely hope that you write an epilouge. Thank you so much for such an entertaining story! ..::Emerald x Lightning::..
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: November 27, 2004 21:42 CST
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great fic! now, you said somthing about an epilogue? when are you writing!? i wanta read it! com'on, ya gotta write it soon! and put it on media miner too! please!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: morwen On: November 27, 2004 21:39 CST
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Reviewed By: morwen On: November 27, 2004 21:39 CST
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Title: julitica
Reviewed By: Julitica [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this! I can't wait for the epologue! It'd be cool if Keiko and Shizuru got pregnant....*smirk* I LOVE THIS! EPOLOGUE! MUST HAVEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
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Reviewed By: antisocial mint (nli) On: July 07, 2004 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
umm how does the chapter thing go? i don't get it bu thats ok, cause it was a good update! r u gonna do an epilogue?? PLEASE do.
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Reviewed By: animelove(nl) On: July 06, 2004 19:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hei!!! THat was really nice!! I've been waiting forever for this to be updated!! And now the story is coming to and end huh? Damn i hate that! I want to tell you that the first few words in your story is being cut off. Is the mating process reversable in this story? Just wondering...i'm not against shizuru or anything...(i wouldn't be reading this if i was...) lol..
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Reviewed By: sm On: June 12, 2004 04:12 CDT
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Excellent story. Looking forward to next chapter. On a side note, I found this story posted on adultfanfiction.net as well but further along in chapters. Are you still updating on mediaminer?
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Reviewed By: animelove(nl) On: June 10, 2004 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHH you updated!!!! Finally!!! By the way, what chapter are u finishing this story at? I just wanna know...also, you should know that the first words of each beginning of the chapter is being cut off...
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: Sakura1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 10:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um hi I just would like to point out your last chapter confused me greatly. Some of the words where missing and it made it hard to uderstand. Besides that I like your fic and hope you continue to write.
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Reviewed By: aoshi4misao [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 01:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW, I love this fic. I'm always happy to find fics that aren't yaoi and this one fits everything I've ever wanted in a fic. It, I just can't explain how much i enjoyed this. Please Please Please keep more coming, I think I might just die if you don't. Thank you for writing this, it is truly one of the best fics I have read in a long time.
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Title: mistake
Reviewed By: (shiroko again) On: April 12, 2004 21:22 CDT
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stupid...why did i type kagome...uh well anyways sorry... i meant keiko ^_^
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Reviewed By: shiroko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 14:26 CDT
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very nice.. i've always liked the kurama/youko and kagome pairings. ^_^. please keep writing and dont let the story die!
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Reviewed By: animelove(nl) On: April 09, 2004 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!! you updated!! i waited forever for u to update! This was a fairly good chapter and i hope to see another chapter soon!
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Reviewed By: papertiger On: April 07, 2004 21:48 CDT
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I was so excited to see that you've continued to expand this story! It is the only fic I've continued to follow in the Yu yu hakusho section! You are a very talented lemon writer (definately a good compliment :) ). Please continue, I'll read whatever you write!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: antisocial mint [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. that was absolutely amazing, you are such a great writer, it was soo good, please write more, i was totally floored it was THAT great. i luved the lemons!! i wish i could write like that. PLEASE UPDATE!! this was awesome!!
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Reviewed By: sesshyluvr On: April 01, 2004 13:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is so well done! It's officially one of my favorites. Please keep updating! I know that it's hard, but I am totally in love with this story! Keep it going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Title: Re-Reviewing!
Reviewed By: Outai Urufu On: March 18, 2004 21:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey, just re-reviewing to tell you to keep this going! Everyone who reviewed wants you to keep this fic alive, so don't disappoint us!!!
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Reviewed By: Pyromania On: March 13, 2004 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE HIEI AND SHIZURU!!!!!
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Title: Think I'm addicted!
Reviewed By: Quadrono Leader [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 09:08 CST
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You know…this story is kinda like drinking salt water. The more I read, the more I want. Congratulations on another excellent chapter. I figured Keiko wouldn't make it to a sixth chapter and I was right. (small hentai laugh) Nice to see Kurama got the honors and not the Youko, though I'm sure his turn is coming up next. Well…hopefully not *next* next…I do want to see more Shizuru/Hiei action, not to mention how both deal with the consequences of that bite. Now that I'm really interested in seeing. More so then the sex I think...*Slaps head* I must be high... Never more then the sex! Anyway…Please update soon! Kenya
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Reviewed By: RedHedLvr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2004 15:20 CST
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Correction, and I knew I was gonna do this, it's Mary MacGregor.
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Reviewed By: animelove(not logged) On: February 20, 2004 17:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's so lemony fresh! Keep up the great work! i like the hiei/shizuru pairing! it's unique!
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Reviewed By: RedHedLvr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 15:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ever hear the song Torn Between Two Lovers by Mary MacGovern? Seems Keiko has solved this problem. Imagine haveing a hot, ever ready Youko combined with the sensitive, caring, so willing to please Kurama! Oooo baby! I SO want to be Keiko. Ahem.... Anyway. Besides all that, ya got a good story going here and it's very well written. Can't wait for the next chapter, hopefully Youko get's his turn. And as always, thank you.
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Reviewed By: Hoshi_Megami On: February 15, 2004 22:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv this story! Hiei and Shizuru...what an unlikely combination!! I wonder what Kazuma will do when he finds out about them! ^_^ Anyways, good story, and update soon! I wanna know whats happens next!
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Reviewed By: RedHedLvr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 05:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Makes me glad divorce human style only costs thousands of dollars. Guess Hiei couldn't restrain himself. hee he. Great chapter, can't wait for the next. And as always. Thank you.
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Title: Sweet
Reviewed By: anonymoUS33 On: February 13, 2004 16:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is SWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEEEET!~!!~!~! Don't quit on it and UPDATE!
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Title: Hot! Hot! Hot!
Reviewed By: Quadrono Leader [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 03:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And now we're getting to the real nitty gritty. We could all wish to have as great as sex as Hiei bestowed on Shizuru, though seeing her as a virgin getting pop took some getting use to. This story is H O T and I hope you keep it that way. Write more and write it soon.
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Reviewed By: Redhedlvr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 15:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great story you have going here. I love that Youko, sorry if I spelled it wrong. I'm hopeing Kurama has his chance to show his feelings as well. And if the next chapeter is about Hiei and Schizu (wrong again, I know) it should be extremely entertaining! Keep up the good work. And thanks.
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Title: This is interesting!
Reviewed By: Quadrono Leader [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, if someone had said that they was going to write a story pairing up Hiei and Shizuru then I'd have laughted until I wet myself. Of all the YYH Pairings that seems to be the most unbelievable to me, but after reading what you wrote, I can actually see the posibility of the situation. You've managed to write it in a way that makes sense for the characters personalities. Granted, the beging started off a bit choppy, but I can see stead improvements. Please, continue this story. I can't wait to see what creative genius you have in store for us next. Kenya - Princess Koriand'r
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