| "Bonds of Consent" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: November 27, 2004 21:42 CST
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great fic! now, you said somthing about an epilogue? when are you writing!? i wanta read it! com'on, ya gotta write it soon! and put it on media miner too! please!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: morwen On: November 27, 2004 21:39 CST
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Reviewed By: morwen On: November 27, 2004 21:39 CST
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Title: julitica
Reviewed By: Julitica [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this! I can't wait for the epologue! It'd be cool if Keiko and Shizuru got pregnant....*smirk* I LOVE THIS! EPOLOGUE! MUST HAVEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
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Reviewed By: antisocial mint (nli) On: July 07, 2004 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
umm how does the chapter thing go? i don't get it bu thats ok, cause it was a good update! r u gonna do an epilogue?? PLEASE do.
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Reviewed By: animelove(nl) On: July 06, 2004 19:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hei!!! THat was really nice!! I've been waiting forever for this to be updated!! And now the story is coming to and end huh? Damn i hate that! I want to tell you that the first few words in your story is being cut off. Is the mating process reversable in this story? Just wondering...i'm not against shizuru or anything...(i wouldn't be reading this if i was...) lol..
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Reviewed By: sm On: June 12, 2004 04:12 CDT
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Excellent story. Looking forward to next chapter. On a side note, I found this story posted on adultfanfiction.net as well but further along in chapters. Are you still updating on mediaminer?
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Reviewed By: animelove(nl) On: June 10, 2004 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHH you updated!!!! Finally!!! By the way, what chapter are u finishing this story at? I just wanna know...also, you should know that the first words of each beginning of the chapter is being cut off...
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: Sakura1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 10:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um hi I just would like to point out your last chapter confused me greatly. Some of the words where missing and it made it hard to uderstand. Besides that I like your fic and hope you continue to write.
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Reviewed By: aoshi4misao [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 01:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW, I love this fic. I'm always happy to find fics that aren't yaoi and this one fits everything I've ever wanted in a fic. It, I just can't explain how much i enjoyed this. Please Please Please keep more coming, I think I might just die if you don't. Thank you for writing this, it is truly one of the best fics I have read in a long time.
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Title: mistake
Reviewed By: (shiroko again) On: April 12, 2004 21:22 CDT
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stupid...why did i type kagome...uh well anyways sorry... i meant keiko ^_^
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Reviewed By: shiroko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 14:26 CDT
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very nice.. i've always liked the kurama/youko and kagome pairings. ^_^. please keep writing and dont let the story die!
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Reviewed By: animelove(nl) On: April 09, 2004 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!! you updated!! i waited forever for u to update! This was a fairly good chapter and i hope to see another chapter soon!
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Reviewed By: papertiger On: April 07, 2004 21:48 CDT
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I was so excited to see that you've continued to expand this story! It is the only fic I've continued to follow in the Yu yu hakusho section! You are a very talented lemon writer (definately a good compliment :) ). Please continue, I'll read whatever you write!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: antisocial mint [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. that was absolutely amazing, you are such a great writer, it was soo good, please write more, i was totally floored it was THAT great. i luved the lemons!! i wish i could write like that. PLEASE UPDATE!! this was awesome!!
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