| "Act Two" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: its me jimmy On: August 02, 2004 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon plz good so far but plz answer the questions it is kind of confusing
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Title: please continue
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 16:37 CDT
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omg...... that was awsome!!!! i hopeu really continue!!! please continue i'll give u a COOKIE! everyone want's a COOKIE!! ^__^ .......... well anyway i have a question how did when she went bac everything had changed? y is it blue? and y did everything change it is very confusing!!!! well i hope to be reading more please update soon!!! please ..... dont make me beg... *on knees* PLEASE UPDATE I WANT MORE I'M HOOKED ON STORYIES!!!!!! O__o
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 17:28 CDT
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Hey...I hope that you haven't given up on continuing this story! I'm curious to see how the alternate reality differs from the one that kagome knows. Also, how in the heck can she get back to her real time so that she can be with her mate Inu -and can he be brought back from the brink of madness. I'm an ardent Inu-Kag fan so any story that's well written and has them ending up together is one that I like following...I'll be looking for an update from you :)
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Title: I won't beg...oh never mind, yes I will!
Reviewed By: Inu's Ever Smirking Toy On: April 14, 2004 12:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting take on the whole storyline. I would tell you that I hate it but then I'd be lying out of my Inu-spanked butt! Hmmmmm Inuyasha, yum! I'm not going to belittle myself by begging. I swear I'm not! I'm Inuyasha's main toy and I want you to update! Soon...ok I'm slipping into "beg" mode. Don't make me beg, NO DON'T MAKE ME! YOU CAN'T! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH! *2 hours later waking up from the torture* 'k,'k, I give in. I'm begging you to update. I'll beg but I won't cry! NO no more torture, I'll cry if you don't update. Pwease!
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Title: TWO THUMB'S UP!!...WAY UP!!
Reviewed By: trinity757575@yahoo.com On: March 15, 2004 17:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH!!!!! i really do hope you continue with this story. don't worry about the few reviews that you've had so far, more will follow, you've got me hooked, i even put you on my favorite authors list so i won't miss any chapters!, that's how great i think this story is, your a wonderful storyteller and writer..oooh goose bumps! and i loved the part where you had sesshomaru save kaugra and gave her a heart for i always felt there was good in her, but with Naraku enpossession of heart she was forced to obey, how may times have we seen on the anime where he would sumon her heart and start to squeeze it if she disobey or even thought it?! not that i'm against sessh/rin for I LOVE THAT PAIRING ALSO, and im most definently a inu/kag pairing, YAY. sorry im babbling its just that your story is so GOOD!!! now no more worrying, your GREAT! so intel next chapter may all your days great and your nights even sweeter! (maybe even alittle hentai?! =P) trinity.
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Reviewed By: AMANDA_TRINH On: March 14, 2004 11:26 CST
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PWEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Title: AWESOME!
Reviewed By: Calico-chan On: March 10, 2004 16:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know what.. there needs to be something higher than a 10 on the originality and enjoyment factor!! Your story is one of THE best I have ever read! Please, please, please keep writing it!! PEOPLE! You HAVE to review! This story is FAAAAR too good not to! .:attacks all the unreviewing readers!!!:.
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Reviewed By: AMANDA_TRINH On: March 10, 2004 11:09 CST
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OOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH WILL INUYASHA EVER LOVE KAGOME?!?!I HAVE WAITED 2 LONG 4 U 2 UPDATE BUT SINCE I AM GREAT FUL I AM INTERESTED 2 SEE U UPDATE!!!UPDATE SOON!!!!!PWEASE!!!*pouts*
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Reviewed By: oracle44 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2004 19:26 CST
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hey great story can't wait to see what happens next.
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Title: ...wow...
Reviewed By: Chibi Genesis [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2004 16:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...wow... This story is..VERY..good. I LOVE IT!! ^^ Not that I'm sterotyping or being mean to other author's, but sometimes you see things like this on here and to tell the truth, they're either VERY unrealistic, or they just aren't written with as much enthusiasm or quite as well as they could be. You've taken the plot and twisted it around to make your means, but the actions and personalities and what I consider to be rather crucial elements and characteristics or the original story itself have so far been kept in tack. Your fic is amazingly written and I love the detail you've put into it! ^^ So please please please continue with it! It's (for lack of a fitting cliche' ending) awesome!!
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Personally, I'd like to see you continue this! It started out interesting and went forward from there. Not to mention the fact that my curiosity is rather peaked wondering just what it is Kagura is/was up to ^_~
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Title: In case you're wondering...
Reviewed By: E. Marie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 02:38 CST
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I know, no one usually wants to be the first to do anything, unless it's setting some incredible record or breaking the barriers of our perseptions of human capablity. Reviewing isn't one of thost things. Hopefully, this will get the ball rolling... By the way, if you're still reading this note, be aware that this story is NOT A SONGFIC!!! No matter how many times I check the setting, the "genre" oscillates between "continuation", which it is, and "songfic", which it most definitely is not. Please, don't let random side notes like that (or this) deter you from reading. Thanks!
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