Title: good story Reviewed By:warriornite [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 20:21 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: This was a well writen and good story it could have stood to be longer but I'm sure you had your reasons for ending it were you did keep writing.