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Reviewed By: IcedFoxDemon On: January 19, 2005 19:40 CST
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DUDE! I love your story, write more will ya? PLEASE! If not i shale hunt you down and kidnapp you and tie u to a chair while you type your story. If you dont, then i shale......i shale.....i forget.....what was i talking about? o well, WRITE MORE PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 18:05 CST
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long time since i last read this story. i see now what kind of wolves Shiri's brother & mother are. i actually like their characters. at least they thin kmore about Shiri than themselves. well, update soon so we can see how this battle turns out.
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Reviewed By: Reika Mizumota On: December 05, 2004 14:28 CST
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Great story!!!
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Reviewed By: kiwifruit On: December 03, 2004 17:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! i reallly love it! that bat guy was strange...and how come she liked Youko all of the sudden? if she is sent to the human world, i hope Youko will be able to find her. PUS!!
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Reviewed By: R_Winner (Not signed in) On: November 27, 2004 11:45 CST
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WooT! More chappies! I think we're doing alright... There are a few little mistakes I am ashamed at myself for missing so I might get this chapter off and do something about that in the near future... However other than that I think it's working...
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Reviewed By: mew_01 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 00:26 CST
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I love how you use the different characters POV's it makes it story way more intresting, to know what the character is actually thinking at the time. I think that you percieved Youko Kurama correctly. He is so dreamy, and mysterious. well...please update soon I cant wait to read what happens next.
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Reviewed By: the beauty behind the mask [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah yes i read your fic its nicely written i really like fics involing the characters point of view it makes the fic more interesting to see the points of vies on characters. i normally don't like oc pairing up with characters because you can't reall have a good inscription on them no matter how well the author protrays him but i made the female charcter youko likes as an exception but otherwise its nicely done. it would be better if the chapters were alittle bit longer the more the reading the better. nice work keep it up! update soon.^_^
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 22:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! this is a great fic! i love how you tell it in a character's POV each chapter. the storyline is great also. and that little thing with Kuronue was very weird, but hey, it did work for the story so i can't complain. (just so you know, that's something coming from me. i'm really not into yaoi.) please update soon. i can't wait for the battle. i need to know what happens.
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Reviewed By: pleaseupdate On: October 21, 2004 16:39 CDT
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pllleeeeeeaaaaaaassssssseeeee update, ya gotta
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Reviewed By: Fallen Angel 2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 10:22 CDT
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YAY! im so happy now^^ after a crappy day of school this hit the right spot^^ please update asap. . :))
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Title: Wow! O.O
Reviewed By: hieisonna2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update Soon! This fic was absolutely amazing!
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Reviewed By: Fallen Angel 2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 12:10 CDT
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I LUV your story. it is so awsome. i do have a question though, is Kuronue a guy? my friend tryed to tell me its a girl. Stupid Baka head. . . any way keep up the good work and update real soon.
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Reviewed By: LunaGoddessOf Foxes [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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very good update soon
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 18:53 CDT
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*sniffles and claps* beautiful! just beautiful! oh my god i think i'm gonna cry! i love it! you must update!
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Reviewed By: AdorableEmy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 16:05 CDT
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That last chapter was sooo good.I love this story and can't wait til you update.
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