| "Burden" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 12:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good !! I like it a lot ! Please update soon !! haha DIE KIKYOU DIE !!! YOU BITCH !!lol god i hate Kikyou so much .... lol i love update on it!
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Title: Rainstorm61879
Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 23:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Intresting. I'll have to keep an eye on this fic. It has promise. Keep going.
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Title: Interesting story
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2004 20:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Hopefully Sesshoumaru protects Kagome from Inuyasha. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Cresent Moon22000 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 18:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
ME LIKE ME LIKE PLz UPDATE UPDATE ASAP OK ja ne
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: AyealisBat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2004 15:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I AGREE!! KILL KIKYOU...AGAIN....LONG LIVE KAGOME ^-^
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Reviewed By: Celestialsafyre On: January 19, 2004 10:50 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great so far, so keep it up, I want to read a lot more!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hino Mitsukiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 00:38 CST
Comment/Review:
You're making Inu-chan in2 the evil character, WHY!?!? And it's hiraikotsu not boomerang bone. You spelled Kirara right. It's Sesshoumaru. And it's Inuyasha, not Inu Yasha and go to: www.wot-club.org.uk/Inuyasha/ it's self-explanatory once you get there. Oh yea, it's Kikyou, not Kikyo. And, this might develop in2 a good fic if you don't pace it too fast like in the beginning, and if you don't rush the romance and lemony parts. It'll take time for Kagome to get over her friends' deaths and Inuyasha's betrayal. Also, you might want to explain why Sesshoumaru saved her, and what happened to Kouga. Don't forget to have Sesshoumaru in character. After all, he's the ice prince and to have him rush in2 sumthing' sexual/romantic is totally OOC. Something that could aid in Kagome and Sesshoumaru in getting closer is Rin. A basic plot could go like this: Shippou and Rin become friends Kagome starts seeing Rin as a daughter Sesshoumaru sees this and starts falling for Kagome, without realizing it Something happens in which Kagome helps Sesshoumaru, which earns her his respect There's a peaceful break and Rin starts calling Kagome okaasan (mom) Something else happens and Sesshoumaru saves Kagome Their relationship goes on from there.. That's a basic storyline for this type of fic, but you don't necessarily have to follow it, just some advice. I'm not a fan of Sess/Kag pairings, but if it's a really good fic, then it's ok. Oh, if you want a good Sess/Kag fic, go to: www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1514886 It's called 'Bonds of Slavery' and Child of the Ancients is a REALLY good author. The fic is completed, so you don't have to worry about updates. Ganbare zo! [Good luck! (masc./rude)] Jaa na! [Later!}
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Reviewed By: Cresent Moon22000 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2004 17:54 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
THATS SO SAD *WHAAAA* POOR SANGO,MIROKU,KEADE,KIRARA. INU SHOULD DIEEEEE!!!!! -_-
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