| "Somthing more" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Kagome1995 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2010 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok first love it second plz more there r allready more then three review also I think it would be beter for kikyo to be a good guy and have her die
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Reviewed By: Day Eagle On: March 15, 2004 16:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey night owl really good! Is kagome gonna get knocked up*pregnant*?very good! keep up the good work oh yeah i almost forgot *UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! :D ttyl!
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 04:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More please.
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Reviewed By: Inu_Angel On: February 18, 2004 19:16 CST
Comment/Review:
hey my_dog_is_not_dead_yet and that chapter was pretty good but it could do without the freky voices people. Also it still could be a little longer
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Reviewed By: Day Eagle On: February 18, 2004 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooohhhh....Nightowl very nice! only a few words to say.. UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D ^.^Nice but one lil detail turn kikyo good a naraku bad in my opinion or at least kikyo die.
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Title: i like this story keep going
Reviewed By: Inu_Angel On: February 16, 2004 19:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
well I thought your fanfic was pretty good i gave the style of writting a 4 because it was pretty basic. I gave spelling and grammer a 10 because i didn't see any spelling mistakes. I gave orginality an 8 cause i've read over 100 fanfics (yes i counted) and most of them have to do with body gaurds or inu being in the army or something. I gave enjoyment a 5 cause it has a good plot but little chapters but that wouldn't matter if your chapters were longer like if you put it on microsoft word it sohould be at least 4 pages long (my own personal rule). There overall was an seven cause 6.8 the average.
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Reviewed By: Nari On: January 31, 2004 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with fallin dark angel
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Reviewed By: Kags2U [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 13:34 CST
Comment/Review:
I like your story so far and I want Kikyo to die :)
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Reviewed By: Spectre97 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 04:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heres one more review for ya. PLZ UPDATE SOON and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Fallin Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 20:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it i vote both kikio and naraku are the bad guys kikio gets killed to *brilant smile* slow and painfull
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